What are the pros and cons of using public transport?
Nowadays, using public transport has been becoming increasingly popular. Many people choose public transport because they want to make a contribution to protect the environment. However, there are certainly some benefits as well as drawbacks to this tendency and this essay aims to highlight both.
One of main advantages of public transport is to better the environment. When people use public transort more and more, they will stop going by car. Hence, the congestion will decrease. In addition, the exhaust fumes from car will become less. The petrol consumption will also fall. Therefore, all of results of stopping using private cars will lead to protecting the environment.
Secondly, using public transport will save the money and resources of both individuals and society. Going by public transport often cost less than other private vehicles because it is subsidized by the government. Also, it is more efficient when comparing the cost per person for travelling. As I represented above, the petrol consumption and carbon emissions will decrease when public transportation is used, so the total cost to society will decrease
Thirdly, public transportation will bring more jobs and more social interactions between people. When travelling by public transportation there are chances to talk and to interact with the people around us. Sometimes, it’s a small joy when you discover a cabinmate has the same viewpoint. Besides, public transportation creates a lot of jobs, hence, it will aid the development of the economy.
Having looked at both sides, slowness is a major problem. Many are is often behind the timetable, which bring about the loss of passengers. For example, I went by bus to a recruiting company for an interview. However, the bus did not run on the schedule so I was late when I went to the company, then the company refuse to recruit me.
Another disadvantage is that public transport such as buses, trains are very crowded. Sometimes, there is not enough space for passengers to have a seat. The vehicle are also used for a long time, therefore, they can be very out of date and dirty. All of these factors make the passenger feel very inconvinienced.
To sum up, going by public transport has both positives and negatives. While people could save money and protect the environment by using public transportation, they have to endure the inconvinience and slowness. In my opinion, if the government invests in modernising public transportion in the years to come, it witll attract a huge number of people to use it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 186, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...re chances to talk and to interact with the people around us. Sometimes, it's a small joy when ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14148681055 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93779180394 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539568345324 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3882699824 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4074074074 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85185185185 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283784036793 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844752166047 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856737126777 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154026365792 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774254466286 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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