Young drivers are careless and overconfident, and too many are killed in accidents. To eliminate this problem, we could teach children the skills of safe driving while they are at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays much more vehicle crushes happen by immature beginner drivers who are more confident of themselves and not care about situation . I am strongly agree with view point they must be taught how to drive and be aware about road signs since school time.
It is human nature , teenagers when they are in adolescence feel overconfident, they might thing everything is allowed to them , driving at that age might cause some unfortunate results as most of them even do not know how to start a car . Some young adults do not have fully knowledge about signs as well .Hence where is put sign stop they may go straight so that may cause some unpleasant consequences and injured and even the worst, get killed by crash . However year after year accidents are getting more and more, most of caused by young inexperienced ones .
Therefore, people should pay due attention for this issue and consider to attend their children to driving classes self evident, where they can learn more about vehicles how control them right and taught to drive , even they can learn how to fix them when required, in that case it get broken on road where there is nobody to help . Also this method has plus side as that children are memorize better than elders because of their elastic memory enables them take on mind almost everything they learn at driving classes and that way they will be able to deal with even the worst situation on road
In conclusion, I find it hard to cast doubt on essentialness of lessons in which children can be aware of right controlling a car before they can sit to drive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, may, so, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6690647482 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40444557053 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.156845508 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.428571429 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.7142857143 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170662930495 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753595637658 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394647383422 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957274138937 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265658541185 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 11.3001002004 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.