Being a celebrity - such as a famous film star or sports personality - brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
The celebrities will always be a public figure and considered as role models for their followers. this popularity and stardom will be proud moment to cherish in one's life. However, carrying the celebrity status will sometime be a curse to them. As a result, I personally believe, celebrity status will create more problems than he benefits they receive.
Firstly, the celebrities are always be in the fame of media. Not only during special occasions, but also when the y enjoy their personal life. They will be interrupted by media, when they are on a family trips, gathering with their friends and during their visits to auspicious places. These will negatively affect their freedom of life and status of individualism.
Secondly, the popularity of celebrities in society will have negative impact on their family life. Their status requires them to be associated with social community all the time and their children will have to loose the caring and love of their father or mother. This will not only risk the life of the celebrities' children, but also the family bond.
On contrast, is is a social belief that, celebrities earn well and enjoy a luxurious life. Even though it is partly true, but the quality of their life will be low compared to a common man or woman's life. This is evident through frequent media reports of suicides, criminal activities and divorce fillings of celebrities.
In a nutshell, celebrities will have to face more problems than benefits such as, affect of their individualism, drawbacks in their family bond and low quality of life. More importantly, they should work hard to consolidate on the benefits of being a celebrity to overcome the repressions of it to live a peaceful life surrounded with family members.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02739726027 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74097574237 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510273972603 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8643276809 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207525193083 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892413185438 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687092281712 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141729850915 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807765566812 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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