Benefits & Disadvantages of Facebook?
Facebook is very advantageous to our life. Firstly, it is an effective way to keep in touch with your friends. You can always chat with your friends by using Facebook Messenger. It also helps you to find your old friends. Thanks to Facebook, you can find your old friends through Facebook’s Friend Finder feature. Secondly, it is a large amount of information and news. You can find a lot of kinds of news such as: politic, life, sport, music, film… In addition, Facebook is a good entertainment. With tons of games and other entertaining applications, surely you will never getting bored. Finally, Facebook is not only being use for communicating and entertaining but also for online business and learning. With millions of subcribers all over the world, with suitable advertising and effective promoting plans, your company will grow strong. As for learning, a lot of groups on Facebook are created for sharing information and experience about searching and getting scholarship so it may help a lot when you are looking for a chance to learning abroad. In conclusion, Facebook is not only just a application but also a good supporting tool for life.
On the other hand, Facebook can be very dangerous. First of all, the more time you spend on Facebook the more you became addictive. For example, a recently research on students shows that most of the students feel anxious if they are not constantly logged in Facebook. When you get addicted to Facebook, you will pay more and more time on it so it is really time consuming. Due to time wasted on Facebook, your work and study will not going well. A lot of students said that they spend more time on Facebook’s games and chit chats than on their studies. Moreover, if you do not use Facebook right, it can be very harmful. In other words, if you are publishing your information and images on Facebook, criminals can get your details and use it. Finally, you have to remember that Facebook is just a social network which means many thing appear on it can be fake. A lot of people use fake profile and images for gaining fame or marketing purposes. Therefore you need to aware of it and stay carefully.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1102, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n conclusion, Facebook is not only just a application but also a good supporting ...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('recently') instead an adjective, or a noun ('research') instead of another adjective.
...more you became addictive. For example, a recently research on students shows that most of the stud...
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Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
... Facebook, your work and study will not going well. A lot of students said that they ...
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Line 3, column 832, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
...ok is just a social network which means many thing appear on it can be fake. A lot of peop...
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Line 3, column 953, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...for gaining fame or marketing purposes. Therefore you need to aware of it and stay carefu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77127659574 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75964910741 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505319148936 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2848738929 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.347826087 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26086956522 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147853195827 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567553772597 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042143664181 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12806160443 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00925166204373 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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