Computers can translate all kinds of languages well. Do our children need to learn more languages in the future?

Essay topics:

Computers can translate all kinds of languages well. Do our children need to learn more languages in the future?

World is a global village now and anybody can access anyone from any part of the world and our generations promote love rather than war.Its language and culture which separate us apart from each other but thanks to Computer language translator we can write letter someone with their own languages.Some people say Computer are enough and a person shouldn't have to learn more than one language. Other says its very astonished to hear someone to speak your own language who is different part of the world. In my opinion its very nice to learn new languages.

As I speak earlier world is a small place to live, As a average businessmen or Information Technology employee we travel to the places which have different culture and languages. We talk different person its very attractive and surprising if we talk them in their own language. Its a bonus point for your work environment as well as professional environment.

In 1987 a person use to work in a stock market who sale stock for living in five years he made up to 600 million dollar when he had an interview in a local channel he reveal his secret of success he use to sell his stock different part of the world so his sale become tripled as an average employee.

The Bottom line is, Learning new languages is not a bad practice it will help you to understand different people around the globe and made you keen in your work and Of course there is nothing negativity in it.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...enerations promote love rather than war.Its language and culture which separate us ...
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...letter someone with their own languages.Some people say Computer are enough and a pe...
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...le say Computer are enough and a person shouldnt have to learn more than one language. ...
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...omputer are enough and a person shouldnt have to learn more than one language. Ot...
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...lier world is a small place to live, As a average businessmen or Information Tech...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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... if we talk them in their own language. Its a bonus point for your work environment...
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... had an interview in a local channel he reveal his secret of success he use to sell hi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, apart from, of course, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6171875 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57466624051 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.082669103 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.75 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.7667163134 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142699970937 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575146252778 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705439953982 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762336678714 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826627057282 0.056905535591 145% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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