Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of giving international aid to poor countries.
Poor countries of the world mostly depend on the international aid for their survival. Which is often extended by the first world countries like USA, China & European Union. The 3rd world countries are mostly from Asia, South America and Africa. International aid has the following advantages and disadvantages.
To start with advantages, firstly, the International aid helps governments of poor countries to stabilize their economies by monetary injections. Secondly, It supports them to reduce or even eliminate the financial debt burdens of the countries. Thirdly, beneficiary governments utilize the aid in welfare of the state by improving health, education and security services within the country. Which they cannot do with their own resources.
Disadvantages entails the errosion of dependancy of pity nations more on aid then trade. For instance, an African country Somalia merely depended on aid in the past. Nevertheless, this attitude continues today because it had not tried to stabilize itself on its own resources. Moreover, perpetual aid exploits the nations potential, in particular, Pakistan is a major example. Furthermore, It weakens the international relations of indebted nation across the globe. This is explicitly because the aid bow downs the heads of its people infront of the richer nations. Consequently, it dents the sovereinity of the nation.
In summation, It can be said that financial aid has certain benefits like economy stabilization, reduction of debt burden, welfare and prosperity of poor nations. Whereas, it has disadvantages like hike in dependancy, exploitation of potential and weaken soverinity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d security services within the country. Which they cannot do with their own resources...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
... dependancy of pity nations more on aid then trade. For instance, an African country...
^^^^
Line 5, column 348, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts the nations potential, in particular, Pakistan is a major example. Furthermore...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'whereas', 'for instance', 'in particular', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.311188811189 0.247107183377 126% => OK
Verbs: 0.104895104895 0.155533422707 67% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0769230769231 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0594405594406 0.0501214627716 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.048951048951 0.0437548338989 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136363636364 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0104895104895 0.0403226058552 26% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.17034634544 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.013986013986 0.0326793684256 43% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0874125874126 0.0861772015684 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00699300699301 0.021408717616 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1653.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 249.0 316.048096192 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.63855421687 6.12580529183 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.437751004016 0.374742101984 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.373493975904 0.28420135186 131% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.289156626506 0.203846283523 142% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.208835341365 0.137316102897 152% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17034634544 2.80594681477 113% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614457831325 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 65.2277451571 60.7387585426 107% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.6470588235 20.7743622355 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8202737392 49.517814964 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2352941176 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6470588235 20.7743622355 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.941176470588 0.814263465372 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 51.9964564139 49.1944974215 106% => OK
Elegance: 2.14754098361 1.69124875643 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487668317887 0.332605444948 147% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0985901794282 0.102741220458 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0683950810525 0.0668466124924 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.5435349973 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146325204587 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184923534657 0.134430193775 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117411424187 0.0742795772207 158% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.325812129195 0.324371583561 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0932348497531 0.0638462369009 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323077439245 0.228012699653 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904376263841 0.058150111329 156% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.