Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of giving international aid to poor counteries.
Poor countries of the world mostly depend on the international aid for their survival. Which is often extended by the first world countries like the USA, China & European Union? The 3rd world countries are mostly from Asia, South Ameria, and Africa. International aid has the following advantages and disadvantages.
To start with advantages, firstly, the International aid helps governments of poor countries to stabilize their economies by monetary injections. Secondly, It supports them to reduce or even eliminate the financial debt burdens of the countries. Thirdly, beneficiary governments utilize the aid in the welfare of the state by improving health, education and security services within the country. Which they cannot do with their own resources.
Disadvantages entail the erosion of dependency of pity nations more on aid then trade. For instance, an African country Somalia merely depended on aid in the past. Nevertheless, this attitude continues today because it had not tried to stabilize itself on its own resources. Moreover, perpetual aid exploits the nation's potential, in particular, Pakistan is a major example. Furthermore, It weakens the international relations of the indebted nation across the globe. This is explicit because the aid bow downs the heads of its people in front of the richer nations. Consequently, it dents the sovereignty of the nation.
In summation, It can be said that financial aid has certain benefits like economy stabilization, reduction of the debt burden, welfare, and prosperity of poor nations. Whereas, it has disadvantages like a hike in dependency, exploitation of potential and weakens sovereignty. So the weaker nations should try and improve their situation by themselves.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'whereas', 'for instance', 'in particular', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.296416938111 0.247107183377 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.107491856678 0.155533422707 69% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0749185667752 0.0946595960268 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0521172638436 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0521172638436 0.0437548338989 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.13680781759 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.00977198697068 0.0403226058552 24% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.14964127311 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0130293159609 0.0326793684256 40% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.100977198697 0.0861772015684 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00977198697068 0.021408717616 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1747.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.54307116105 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.426966292135 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.359550561798 0.28420135186 127% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.277153558052 0.203846283523 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.198501872659 0.137316102897 145% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14964127311 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59925093633 0.56093040696 107% => OK
Word variations: 63.7152709267 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8333333333 20.7743622355 71% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1826558313 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0555555556 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 20.7743622355 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.814263465372 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 50.7883895131 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.09230769231 1.69124875643 124% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427741273494 0.332605444948 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100218619617 0.102741220458 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0691354553724 0.0668466124924 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53951820146 0.534860350844 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.141954699869 0.148594505496 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170866276127 0.134430193775 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108413656365 0.0742795772207 146% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.397638051341 0.324371583561 123% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0541463492866 0.0638462369009 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30051339378 0.228012699653 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451023712305 0.058150111329 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.5751503006 272% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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