Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities .
To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
Because of the growth of the number of supermarkets and the small shops' weakness in the competition, people consider that the result of the small shops' disappearing would negatively affect the local societies. In my opinion, I agree with the view that local communities experienced a large, distant between their people, but shopping in supermarkets has many advantages which worth it.
First of all, discuss the advantages of the supermarket which lead people to shop in hypermarkets rather than local small shops. Firstly, gathering all categories of basic needs equipment in one place, make it easier for people to meet all their needs in one place; what is more, instead of moving around the city to find the various types of tools, they could find everything in center malls or supermarket which is located in the center of the city or outskirts. Therefore it is more convenient for people searching their whole requirement at the same time in one place and not waste their time on going from one shop to another.
However, I agree that supermarket caused the distance between people and the neighbours hardly ever visiting each other while shopping. It means the community is going to be disappearing. Surely it has negative impacts on societies and communication; nevertheless, other places could be replaced rather than shops such as institutes, gyms, schools which are an appropriate place for people connecting and helpful communications.
In conclusion, although the supermarkets have many merits for shoppers, it leads the local community to be dead due to the fact that the number of supermarkets grows increasingly and the citizens prefer shopping in hypermarkets than the local shops.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'shops'' or 'shop's'?
Suggestion: shops'; shop's
...he number of supermarkets and the small shops weakness in the competition, people con...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...in the center of the city or outskirts. Therefore it is more convenient for people search...
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Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...e in one place and not waste their time on going from one shop to another. However, ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249169435216 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.136212624585 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0897009966777 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046511627907 0.0501214627716 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.046511627907 0.0437548338989 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152823920266 0.122226691241 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0398671096346 0.0403226058552 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93874882018 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0232558139535 0.0326793684256 71% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0996677740864 0.0861772015684 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00996677740864 0.021408717616 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166112956811 0.011925033212 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1708.0 1933.35771543 88% => OK
No of words: 275.0 316.048096192 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21090909091 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352727272727 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243636363636 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.149090909091 0.137316102897 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93874882018 2.80594681477 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552727272727 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.9721149163 60.7387585426 92% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0891783567 56% => OK
Sentence length: 30.5555555556 20.7743622355 147% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.6775544745 49.517814964 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.777777778 127.492653851 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.5555555556 20.7743622355 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 0.814263465372 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 54.9191919192 49.1944974215 112% => OK
Elegance: 1.92753623188 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444394852013 0.332605444948 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139724831004 0.102741220458 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0894406452411 0.0668466124924 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.665616601228 0.534860350844 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188910666791 0.148594505496 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.223309059274 0.134430193775 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128454465093 0.0742795772207 173% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.314799062817 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0841196158715 0.0638462369009 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322517127771 0.228012699653 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107379097634 0.058150111329 185% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.