The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has transformed the way we live, communicate and do business. Mobile phones can also be the cause of social or medical problems. What forms do these problems take?
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of mobile phones?
Nowadays, people depend largely on cell phones. Despite using mobiles will be beneficial for business communication. But it still has some bad effectives, which it goes back to users. In addition, it may create social struggles and ailment as well. So i will argue here the pros and cons of cell phones.
Recently, there are enormous of people believe that cell phones would help them. As it has solved their problem in so many cases. Specifically, people who stay far away of their bussiness as well as their family. They can keep on touch with them via this means. In addition, phones have merits like text services, as they could function it by doing other communication instead of calling conversation through ths apparatus. For example, there is one busniess man , and his name is Jack Philip the owner of Iffco company in dubai. He was doing managment by his device while he was away of the country for family business. Moreover, he was answering calls for urgent reasons. In opposite, he was following up his business and checking each single point about what is happening in the company when he is out. Whereas, there are a number of people who travel out of their home country for studying. And others who get abroad for working. So they will always be in touch with their family or parents. Hence, these people prefer to be constantly updated about their family conditions. So, this device helped a large number of people. It was a reason for problem decreasing.
On the contrary, mobiles could be an issue for presenting social broblems and other medical aspects. Cell phones would create health diseaes. Hence, there are a number of people who are being addicted of mobile using. As a result, it may increase the pecentage of making cancer in brain. in addition, ear problems. There are reports posted in health journal in UK. As it showed people who peresistently use cell phones. They were exposed to cancers in brain cells and ears impaired alike. Whereas, a study shows that people who overuse these devices, they could fall into love relation suspense. There was a family had problem with their duaghter, as she was caught by making a relationship with mature. As that mature had a previous criminal records. Whereas, her family have not known him before. Although, family's daughter was immature which it led to illegal relation. In addition, it might be a victim without her parents guidance.
To sum up, cell phones have pros and cons. We use these mobiles in good things, it will return to us with better things. So mobile phones have a positive purposes, if we use it in positive way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, as a result, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 450.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47715805192 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 16.0721442886 230% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5751711824 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.5405405405 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1621621622 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.81081081081 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170410216382 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376761836709 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044934765671 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113218680896 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505628236442 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 13.0946893788 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.73 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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