With an increasing population communicating via internet and text messages, face to face communication will become a thing of the past.
To what extent do you agree?
The dawn of twenty first century has witnessed an unprecedented evolution in the field of communication. It is believed that due to increasing use of technological communication, face to face communication will become history. In my opinion, I agree that face to face communication will become less popular.
I am in favor of the argument based on the phenomenon that has transpired in our society. These days internet-based communication is quick, reliable and easily accessible thus eliminating the traditional mechanism where people used to travel long distance to interact or deliver message. Since internet network is available around the globe, people can contact friends or family member scattered around the world at any hour of the day. Furthermore, internet communication is available in many different ways. For example, we can easily send emails, messages or engage in video chat. In other words, it is easier to see live through the screen. For instance, I use skype to every evening to chat with my parents in Pakistan.
Secondly, the advent of technology has transformed the business functions and the way it performs. Conventionally, trader used to travel long distance to buy a product or for business meetings which is costly and time consuming. The instant communication tools have eliminated the need to travel long distance or to have an interaction or deliver a message. For instance, online shopping has made it easier for a customer to purchase the product without even visiting the shop or to have face to face interaction making business transactions quicker.
All in all contemplating, the use of modern technology has grown substantially leading to frequent use of voice call, emails, messages and video and minimized the time and effort for in person communication. This trend clearly suggest that it will certainly replace the face to face interaction in near future
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: twenty-first
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14761897216 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549342105263 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3856736757 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251041929023 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843517495977 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108317658034 0.0667982634062 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163378655798 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11863050069 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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