The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever been before. what do you think are the main causes of this difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap?
The difference between rich and poor countries is proliferating by every passing day. Developed nations are becoming more rich and developing countries are still fighting with basic challenges. There are numerous reasons of this inequality. However, there are enormous measures available to improve the situation.
The most prominent reason is an ever-increased population. For instance, in last two decades population has just doubled in India and due to this the government is unable to fulfil fundamental needs of people and resulting poverty. In addition, natural resources are also declining because of population growth and making scenario more deplorable for poor nations. Moreover, illiteracy could also be considered as another prime reason as many people who are uneducated, unable to secure jobs and could not provide any contribution to country’s economy.Finally, corruption came out as another challenge as due to higher level of corruption in politics and business, government services are unable to reach to the general mass.
However, all these issue are interrelated and governments and individuals could play substantial role to reduce the gap. Firstly, it is important to educate people about the consequences of population growth especially in rural areas through adverts and campaign. Secondly, Governments and local bodies ought to impose strict laws against corruption and should make tough punishments to regulate the same. Lastly, developed nations should come forward together to provide essentials aids to poor nations by helping them financially.
To conclude, it is very intrinsic to address this issue before it is too late. Hence, with the collective efforts of local governments and international bodies I believe, we could minimize the gap and circumstances better for poor countries.
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Suggestion: Finally
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69343065693 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09281537647 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2358197365 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0982113387877 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356187912824 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331538114331 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0621770560561 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277350372547 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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