It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology age has a large impact in our life. So, there are a large number of people beileve that because of technology may lose their their customs due to the technology expansion, i totally agree with this point.
Technology age has a large impact in our life. So, there are a large number of people beileve that because of technology may lose their their customs due to the technology expansion, i totally agree with this point.
However, computers has made our life easier, but it could be a reason for forgetting our conventions, for example internet will be an access to for users to distribute their cultures and traditions photos online, in particular the local dress local ( Fashion ) nowadays so many youngers have altered the way of wearing their clothes, as we know people's minds have been changed in the modern times by following the development of technology sets. Furthermore there are a large amonut of people like other cultures techniques, as they like to imitate them precisely.
Whereas, technology has a part of changing food types, there are a growing numbers of people have been affected by western dishes. For example, people in Jordan prefer eating several of exotic foods to eating traditions one. Some traditional food restaurants have been closed due to unaccepting people buying from them the traditional food. Undoubtedly, internet is a part of technology, and it is playing an important role in the community. So we can not deny that. Although, that there is a big effective on people by using tachnology, but they still conserve the respected customs and cultures.
To conclude, technology might be a reasong for changing people's minds for accepting other countries cultures and tradition, as it will help them for forgetting their original tradition gradually.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...large impact in our life. So, there are a large number of people beileve that because of technolo...
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Suggestion: their
...eve that because of technology may lose their their customs due to the technology expansion...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...nventions, for example internet will be an access to for users to distribute their cultur...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ine, in particular the local dress local Fashion nowadays so many youngers have ...
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Suggestion:
...articular the local dress local Fashion nowadays so many youngers have altered t...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ing the development of technology sets. Furthermore there are a large amonut of people like...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, whereas, for example, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17509727626 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79780877744 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579766536965 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 105.737238645 49.4020404114 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.909090909 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25369820527 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110545862773 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114100909834 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173091171739 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892436801737 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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