Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
Number of criminals are increasing day by day. Some people say most criminals commit to do more crimes after their first punishment. This essay discusses about the reason for this and how to reduce it.
To begin with, main reason criminals trend to do more crimes after first punishment is they live with the other prisoners during the punishment period. Prisoners don’t have anything to do in jail. Therefore, they discuss about previous crimes they did and try to improve the week points of those past activities. Sometimes, they plan crimes to do after they get free.
Secondly, due to lack of financial support and skills they tend to start crimes for living. Normally ex-convicts couldn’t find jobs in the industry. The criminal records don’t allow them to find a job and the community doesn’t accept them as well. Also they don’t have proper qualifications and experience to perform a job.
However, there are so many ways to improve this situation. One method is by introducing of skill enhancement programs in prison. Programs to improve computer literacy, mechanics and agriculture. This will help them to find a job after they move back to local community. Another method is to use prisoners for community work. Then they don’t get the time to spend with other prisoners and it helps to move with the community. In addition, it is very important to build their mental stability by introducing meditation, yoga, dancing during the other spare time.
In conclusion, I would like to say by a proper rehabilitation programme we can improve this situation. Prisoners are also human beings.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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Suggestion: help them find
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228125 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.184375 0.155533422707 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.078125 0.0946595960268 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04375 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.059375 0.0437548338989 136% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.090625 0.122226691241 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0125 0.0403226058552 31% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.82753005737 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0625 0.0326793684256 191% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.06875 0.0861772015684 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.009375 0.021408717616 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.003125 0.011925033212 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1635.0 1933.35771543 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 316.048096192 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14661654135 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338345864662 0.374742101984 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259398496241 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206766917293 0.203846283523 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.176691729323 0.137316102897 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82753005737 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 56.5382837314 60.7387585426 93% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.3 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1964815831 49.517814964 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 127.492653851 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3 20.7743622355 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.65 0.814263465372 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 39.2398496241 49.1944974215 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.15217391304 1.69124875643 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287641439078 0.332605444948 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0946133744768 0.102741220458 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0748059981067 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.494829264992 0.534860350844 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12833634914 0.148594505496 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981054204492 0.134430193775 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680385028038 0.0742795772207 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293043236487 0.324371583561 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.059766490071 0.0638462369009 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17869852577 0.228012699653 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617825494274 0.058150111329 106% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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