Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals

Essay topics:

Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals

Dolphins are one of the most intelligent and complex creatures in the sea, but many people think that performing in the circus is their job. And i do not agree with that opinion
First they may get hurt or injured during training or performance because manager's acting. If dolphins do not follow the instructions, they can have many injury by the trainers and being starved. Secondly, they lose their natural ability of a sea creatures. They can not hunt, can not find food, and so on. When we release them back to sea, they may died. Finally they look miserable when being kept in pools and forced to follow routines everyday.
This is my opinion and i think it should be heared by all the circus's manager.

Votes
Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...forming in the circus is their job. And i do not agree with that opinion First t...
^
Line 2, column 248, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'creature'?
Suggestion: creature
...hey lose their natural ability of a sea creatures. They can not hunt, can not find food, ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 357, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...elease them back to sea, they may died. Finally they look miserable when being kept in ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... in pools and forced to follow routines everyday. This is my opinion and i think it sho...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...tines everyday. This is my opinion and i think it should be heared by all the ci...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 41.998997996 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 583.0 1615.20841683 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 127.0 315.596192385 40% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5905511811 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35699682299 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38978648045 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 176.041082164 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.685039370079 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 176.4 506.74238477 35% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.790766612 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.875 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197714506551 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759305158805 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954742662718 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115064066684 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863569268389 0.056905535591 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.