Many people believe that social networking sites such as Facebook have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society To what extent do you agree

There is no denying the fact that the phenomenon of social media is ubiquitous across the globe due to its paramount important. One school of thought opine that it is worthless, however others consider that a couple of problems also occur because of the same. Although this has a plethora of merits, yet numerous demerits are also there which will be elaborated in upcoming paragraphs.
Initiating with the best possible benefits, the most significant advantage is, people can communicate each other just a click away across the world with less expense. Along with it, clear visualization to understand the mood and health is also benefited the parents to identify the children’s studying abroad. In addition to this, people find their friends and classmates those who lost their contact years back. To cite an example, peoples exchange the fun and entertainment through the social media groups of High school, pre-secondary school groups. As a result, everyone feels they are very closed each other even if the geographical regions are far beyond.
On the paradoxical side, there are many draw backs as well, First and foremost, some people misuse the advent of technology for illegal activities as well as cheating peoples with false news and advertisements. For instance, there are numerous advertisements in Facebook, click the link below to earn money, free vouchers, internet, gifts, etc. secondly, teenagers spent lot of time in YouTube so that they do not interact with others it affects their social responsibilities such as respect the elders, subsequently, it could have affect their emotion and intuition.
To conclude, without any doubt, this is a mixed bag. If this topic has many positives, then the negative points of this notion may not underestimate.

Votes
Average: 6.9 (10 votes)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23157894737 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86674611756 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670175438596 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5572125971 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104658150964 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297909778863 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292971731926 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0563031624014 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358091894369 0.056905535591 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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