Many of the world’s cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage.
What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, a lot of cities around the world are suffering from a deficiency of houses. Many causes could lead to that panic problem. Increased population and the presence of facilities are the most important factors. Rather than the aged causes, solutions are to emerge from both the individual and the governmental aspects.
Firstly, for most of these cities, One can easily notice they have something in common. It is the high number of population. That actually makes these cities crowded to an extent of making houses are teeming with people. A good example of that is Cairo, the capital of Egypt, according to the last census done in 2016. The total number of inhabitants in Cairo exceeds its record of 25 million. Such a governmental burden, make it is too tough to allocate budget for housing projects publically. So shortage will be unveiled.
Secondly, the facilities availability is another crucial factor. As soon as more facilities are nearer to the houses, so the attraction to these areas will be increased. People tend to have all of their desired services to be near from home. For instance, gas station, supermarkets, and schools are unavoidable services needed for any family. That reflects into making the old places, or commonly known as the midtown, of any city to be highly crowded.
Furthermore, other factors and causes could be easily distinguished by the specialists.
From my humble opinion, solutions are the responsibility of both individuals as well as the governments. Young people should steer clear of being attached to the main cities and inspect for new opportunities in new cities. These new cities should have the minimum requirements of good quality of life. Absolutely, it is a mission done previously by the government. In order to construct new cities to be equipped with suitable services and facilites. This will help the new generations to relocate to new places, and decrease the push on main old cities.
To conclude, Housing shortage is an alarming problem that is spread in most cities worldwise, causes are not limited to population increase or absence of facilities in newly expanded areas, but also the solutions are beneath. Hand in hand, people with the government could change this willingly. I hope to find these solutions applicable in the nearest possible future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'facilities'' or 'facility's'?
Suggestion: facilities'; facility's
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13385826772 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8445244407 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556430446194 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1201024718 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2307692308 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6538461538 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144361696309 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0352604774466 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306039438095 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679333425215 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317535078106 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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