Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicine and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animal to suffer, while other are in favour of these because of their benefit to humanity. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Animal experimentation is playing an important role in the field of medicine and in other products. Some people think that these researches are injustice and it should be prohibited. While other believe that human life is far more valuable than animals. In my opinion, animal researches has been given many incredible results in terms of medicine and other product so the cost outweigh the benefit.
The main disadvantage of animal testing is that, the animals like mice, pigs and dogs involved in science experiments, they forced to live in cage. Meanwhile, they are exposed with potentially harmful chemicals, radiation and forced to eat many dangerous substances that could be lethal. Many of the experiments are misleading and may end up with no result. So, the wastage of animal life is pointless. For example, in UK, 2012, 62% of licensed granted by government allowed animals from moderate to severe suffering and even can cause death.
Despite the negatives above, animal experimentations has been given far more medical progress since 20th century. Due to these experiments, many valuable human lives has been saved. There couldn't be any alternative, other than animals as some of them have same body system and genetic sequences as human has. Even computer cannot detect such type of complex molecules and cells. For example , British Royal Society, in favour of animal experiment state that due to animals testing people get various vaccinations like rabies and number of medicines has been discovered. Scientist has made many successful experiments in term of major disease and their cure.
In conclusion, I agree with this assertion, It is true that animals suffered a lot during experiments due to forceful and cruel act but the human life is far more worthful than animal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17931034483 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75567093874 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61724137931 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7576290707 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.875 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316286874073 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095472469786 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0595667145462 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185704802157 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647052732722 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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