Nowadays, many adults play video games. Is it good or bad development? Give you opinion and include relevant examples from your personal experience
Video games are meant with consideration that the people will enjoy and pass their time effectively. But in the current era of growing mobile technology, adults are addicted to video games than the teenagers which can be seen in two ways either bad development or good. In my opinion, to play a video game will not cause a negative development but addiction to that will definitely cause damage.
Now, on the first hand to play a video game as a mature is not a bad thing to do. To support this statement there are multifarious reasons. First and foremost is that a person who is working daily up to 8 hours a day will surely need some time to refresh himself, at that time he can play a video game on the way to home or after reaching home he can revitalize himself by playing his favorite game. Secondly, a video game can help him to improve business strategies as nowadays there are lots of games related to business development.
But, apart from all there is one drawback and can be considered as a salient one, because an addiction to particular video game can cause major damage to his personal as well as organizational life.
For an instance, as an adult considering myself at an age of 27 still playing video games, just to stimulate myself. I used to work 9 hours a day, and travel by train to work place and vice versa. So, after finishing the office hours I used to entertain myself by engaging into video game in my mobile. By doing this, I certainly feel relax and energized.
To sum up, as an adult to play a video game is not bad development but an addiction to this will certainly do.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'apart from', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227414330218 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.165109034268 0.155533422707 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0529595015576 0.0946595960268 56% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0560747663551 0.0501214627716 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0498442367601 0.0437548338989 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0996884735202 0.122226691241 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0467289719626 0.0403226058552 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60098759225 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0623052959502 0.0326793684256 191% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00311526479751 0.00163938923432 190% => OK
Determiners: 0.0965732087227 0.0861772015684 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0342679127726 0.021408717616 160% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00623052959502 0.011925033212 52% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1612.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 295.0 316.048096192 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46440677966 6.12580529183 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.240677966102 0.374742101984 64% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.193220338983 0.28420135186 68% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142372881356 0.203846283523 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0949152542373 0.137316102897 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60098759225 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.037074148 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535593220339 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 54.5921867934 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6923076923 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7486964849 49.517814964 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 127.492653851 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7743622355 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.923076923077 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 42.0143415906 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.37931034483 1.69124875643 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167794742016 0.332605444948 50% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107196150235 0.102741220458 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0558254219526 0.0668466124924 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.604368315036 0.534860350844 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.20291089045 0.148594505496 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072915725453 0.134430193775 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381071466332 0.0742795772207 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.276113598073 0.324371583561 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0589636311949 0.0638462369009 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109133621022 0.228012699653 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354670413186 0.058150111329 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.