In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

Essay topics:

In order to solve traffic problems, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

In current years, traffic problems day by day is getting increase .According this, it causes many different problems such as air pollution and accidents. And in order to tackle these problems governments should tax secluded car proprietors heavily and spent the money to ameliorate public transportation.Still it has both sides:advantages and cons.

The first and foremost solution is imposing high taxes to the private car owners is profitable for everyone. Private vehicle owners pay the government tax on private vehicles wherefore government collect the money.I t is big source of save the money.Government make the new rods and clean the environment.If all of people use the government vehicles to solve traffic
problems.

The first most big problem for private vehicles is so long traffic jams and second is many accidents scenes.

Votes
Average: 2.2 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'such as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.35 0.247107183377 142% => OK
Verbs: 0.164285714286 0.155533422707 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.135714285714 0.0946595960268 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0285714285714 0.0501214627716 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0142857142857 0.0437548338989 33% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0642857142857 0.122226691241 53% => OK
Participles: 0.0214285714286 0.0403226058552 53% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.24645638371 2.80594681477 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285714285714 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.1 0.0861772015684 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00714285714286 0.021408717616 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 852.0 1933.35771543 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 131.0 316.048096192 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.50381679389 6.12580529183 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 4.20517956788 80% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.419847328244 0.374742101984 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.343511450382 0.28420135186 121% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.229007633588 0.203846283523 112% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145038167939 0.137316102897 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24645638371 2.80594681477 116% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 176.037074148 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656488549618 0.56093040696 117% => OK
Word variations: 58.8790673325 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 26.2 20.7743622355 126% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3990227935 49.517814964 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.4 127.492653851 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7743622355 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.814263465372 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38877755511 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 3.99599198397 551% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 60.5511450382 49.1944974215 123% => OK
Elegance: 2.10344827586 1.69124875643 124% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533254554233 0.332605444948 160% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.181386684444 0.102741220458 177% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0467162907486 0.0668466124924 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.780499139733 0.534860350844 146% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14964273286 0.148594505496 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.273850507623 0.134430193775 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139133378791 0.0742795772207 187% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.241618725902 0.324371583561 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0756060987381 0.0638462369009 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314521484741 0.228012699653 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1351947363 0.058150111329 232% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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