Popular hobbies and interests change over time and are more a reflection of trends and fashions than an indication of what individuals really want to do in their spare time.To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Every individual has their own method of living. Some live with their never compromising attitude and do the things that make them happy without worrying the change in trends and some follow the trends and switch their hobbies and interest according to the fashion. It depends on individuals how they want to spend their lives.
It is true that latest fashion has changed over the time that eventually change taste, fashion and hobbies of people. Visiting the new and expensive restaurants or buy latest fashion clothes are the latest examples of changing trends. These people are very status conscious even they sacrifice their happiness. Around 45% of world population dispose their income just to keep themselves one step up in the society than others. Sometimes it is justifiable to follow the footsteps of the others as we also are the part of this society if we don't pace up with them we may left far behind.
On the other hand, some people without giving any concern follow their own rules and they do whatever that make them happy. For instance, a lot of people are crazy about playing cricket since they are kid they are so obsessed with their hobby that they want to keep it alive for the rest of their lives. This enthusiasm make them more livable. Involving in our own hobbies and interest can be a great fun in your own world but sometimes you ignore the world that exist outside of that and you may end up suffering by not following them.
In the end, both are necessary in humans' life. You cannot give more priority to one on another therefore, balancing is essential. Keeping yourself happy is equally important as enable you to be member of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7337883959 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33416160655 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.905843839 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5333333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241232581475 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748379659978 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593314823008 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138978400714 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637902071061 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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