Q: Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries but its disadvantages cannot be overlooked. What are some of the problems of tourism?
Pass are the days, when people used to spend their entire life living at one place and the word “Tour” is meant for richer only. This change take place due to advancement of technology day by day. Nowadays, Tourism become a lucrative business for investment. Tourism not only satisfy the desires of traveler but also catalyze the growth rate of travelling country. Despite of several benefits it has counterparts also which will be discussed in forth coming paragraphs.
Tourism involves a lot of money and time. Moreover it put a burden on travelling country to provide security and safety to foreigners. Whilst the important drawback involve in travelling is mode of transport, which runs on non-renewable sources of energy. In addition to this, frequent travelling by air or road, also enhances noise and air pollution.
Furthermore, legion of human are indulge in these unproductive activities in spite of involving in inventions or discoveries. For an instance, just extrapolate on the situation if everyone is busy in travelling who will work for the nation. Sometimes, it also give some bad experiences that could not be forgotten for lifetime. Some people put themselves in unseen circumstances just to satisfy their adventure worms and ended with bitter lessons. A troop of young unexperienced mountaineers at Himalaya recently trapped in heavy storm which leads to their death is illustration for this.
In a nutshell, everything has its usage limit and beyond it always has side-effects. Even in ancient time people undertook hazardous journey on foot to far flung areas solely driven by their passion to find out what lies yonder, so its human nature to explore the world but priorities must be enlisted before proceeding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'indulged'.
Suggestion: indulged
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Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
...work for the nation. Sometimes, it also give some bad experiences that could not be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2206405694 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99396775363 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665480427046 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2283598426 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6875 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136731652529 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433445485708 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443518180887 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750601414177 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217795445586 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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