Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among the poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? or is it the responsibility of the governments of the poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?
In today's global era, there are many countries exist in this world those are less fortunate to enjoy all existing facilities and developments available in other part of the world. Some people thinks it is required to share the wealth by those wealthier country with those needy countries. However, I strongly disagree with this thought and believe that it is rather the responsibility of the government of those countries to provide all required facility to their citizens. My thought can be supported by the arguments in two folds as follows.
To start with, People elects the government with the faith that the people in the government are the people with a great vision and mission . They are good at not only ruling the country but also to understand and satisfy the requirements of their citizens. People pay taxes to avail facilities like education, medication, employment , recreation and so on.
Moreover, It is the government who has the command on natural resources and national treasures those can be utilize in best possible manner in benefit of country and their residents. The government can get connect to the government of any country and can can deal on behalf of country for developments. They are the representative of country who can understand the need and possible solution to get help from global market in exchange of services or products. The support availed in terms of business will help the citizens to bow their head with pride. it is the demand of time to get supported in place of getting helped by neighbours. For instance , African country is very good at agriculture and cultivation of coffee. Their government can get best facility of medication and education in exchange of agricultural products in global market.
On the other hand, when the entire world has been squeezed in to the small village, every wealth country should come forward to support and guide the government of poor countries for their growth and development. sharing facility would be the best concept to flourish together on the platform of Global culture. The recent example of FDI policy implementation in India , is the greatest model of empowerment of country by their own rather to ask for help.
All in all, in order to stand on one's own leg , government has to take all possible measures. So, I can say that it is the pivotal responsibility of any government to cope up the needs of their population.
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there are many countries exist in this world those are less fortunate to enjoy all existing facilities
there are many countries which exist in this world and they are less fortunate to enjoy all existing facilities
there are many countries existing in this world and they are less fortunate to enjoy all existing facilities
People elects the government
People elect the government
They are good at not only ruling the country but also to understand
They are good at not only ruling the country but also understanding
They are good at not only to rule the country but also to understand
It is the government who has the command on natural resources and national treasures those can be utilize in best possible manner in benefit of country
It is the government who has the command on natural resources and national treasures which can be utilized in the best possible manner in the benefit of country
The government can get connect to the government of any country
The government can get connected to the government of any country
Sentence: The government can get connect to the government of any country and can can deal on behalf of country for developments.
Description: The fragment can can contains a repeated word
Suggestion: Delete a possible duplicate wod:
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 406 350
No. of Characters: 1968 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.489 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.847 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.755 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 141 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 112 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 77 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.882 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.241 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.572 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.065 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e people with a great vision and mission . They are good at not only ruling the c...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at vision and mission . They are good at not only ruling the country but also to ...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...derstand and satisfy the requirements of their citizens. People pay taxes to avai...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s like education, medication, employment , recreation and so on. Moreover, It ...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'those cans'?
Suggestion: this can; those cans
...atural resources and national treasures those can be utilize in best possible manner in b...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the best'.
Suggestion: in the best
...national treasures those can be utilize in best possible manner in benefit of country a...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: can
...ct to the government of any country and can can deal on behalf of country for developme...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... They are the representative of country who can understand the need and possibl...
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Line 5, column 362, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sentative of country who can understand the need and possible solution to get he...
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Line 5, column 557, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... citizens to bow their head with pride. it is the demand of time to get supported ...
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Line 5, column 653, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tting helped by neighbours. For instance , African country is very good at agricul...
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Line 5, column 748, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the best'.
Suggestion: get the best
...ivation of coffee. Their government can get best facility of medication and education in...
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Line 8, column 214, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sharing
...tries for their growth and development. sharing facility would be the best concept to f...
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Line 8, column 369, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...le of FDI policy implementation in India , is the greatest model of empowerment of...
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Line 10, column 46, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n all, in order to stand on ones own leg , government has to take all possible mea...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'moreover', 'so', 'as to', 'for instance', 'to start with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266514806378 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.134396355353 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0797266514806 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0296127562642 0.0501214627716 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0410022779043 0.0437548338989 94% => OK
Prepositions: 0.150341685649 0.122226691241 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0227790432802 0.0403226058552 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83030602392 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0410022779043 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.00227790432802 0.00163938923432 139% => OK
Determiners: 0.109339407745 0.0861772015684 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0250569476082 0.021408717616 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00683371298405 0.011925033212 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2434.0 1933.35771543 126% => OK
No of words: 411.0 316.048096192 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92214111922 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347931873479 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274939172749 0.28420135186 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197080291971 0.203846283523 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126520681265 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83030602392 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.037074148 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489051094891 0.56093040696 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.594753093 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.6315789474 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2932014307 49.517814964 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.105263158 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 20.7743622355 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 3.99599198397 375% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.1254962223 49.1944974215 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.14444444444 1.69124875643 127% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445121453193 0.332605444948 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115799534797 0.102741220458 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0754309015035 0.0668466124924 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587880192075 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127794403848 0.148594505496 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209191065396 0.134430193775 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892865729167 0.0742795772207 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.435323025471 0.324371583561 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0803792588497 0.0638462369009 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323987206344 0.228012699653 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539497081004 0.058150111329 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.68436873747 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41683366733 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 5.90881763527 237% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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