Education is important for individuals to estabish a life in contemporary era. Some people attend school at an age of six; whereas, others go to school at a more early age. Attending school at a yong age is prevalant in China. I think this phenomenon benefits both children and parents.
Children have the opportunity to meet enormous peers by attending school in early age. If a child is confined in home, he will have few playmates. However, children play with numerous peers in school. Moreover, child develops familiarity if he attend school at a young age. Child wo first attends school at the age of six or seven years old has difficulty in sitting in a classroom. These children feel uneasy in school and tend to escape from school. Therefore, it is better for children to attend school at an early age. Besides, parents also share the merit of this approach.
Parents can liberate themselves from looking after their children all the time and continue to work if their children attend kindergarden at an early age. If a child is kept in home, parents have to sacrifice work to look after it. Once a child is eligible to enroll in a kindergarden, parents can send it to school in the morning and pick it home in the afternoon. Parent can take advantage of this daytime to work as a part-time employee. Thus, parents also enjoy the advantage of children go to school at a young age.
To summarize, attending school at an early age has merits. Both children and parents can enjoy the advantage of this approach. Therefore, it is better for children to attend school at an early age. Normally, Chinese child go to kindergarden at he age of three years old.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'attends'.
Suggestion: attends
...eover, child develops familiarity if he attend school at a young age. Child wo first a...
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Line 7, column 248, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'ages'.
Suggestion: ages
... Chinese child go to kindergarden at he age of three years old.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70648464164 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67581145051 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443686006826 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1972715652 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.6666666667 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9523809524 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280870100083 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109393272556 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606587144868 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208592787096 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399720466191 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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