Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
World-widely people have different food taste in reference to their religious and cultural believes, fitness issues and certain other elements. However, in today's century numerous number of people are taking every step possible to make planet earth a better place to live for both humans and animals. This mission is supported by curtailing particular food types from daily diet for longevity followed by restricted hunting policies to protect endangered species.
About 40% of humans around the globe have significantly swayed their thoughts towards restricting meat consumption is key to a healthy living. Furthermore, there is a list of several cultures and religions that abstain its community from consuming seafood and animal originated meals such as Hinduism, Buddhism and Christians. Moreover, a particular stratum of society hold strong feelings that eating vegetables, legumes and food derived from organic origin and not only economical but also beneficent for healthy living because of its higher nutritional value and lower fat contents. In addition, another plus point is that it is also affordable by poverty stricken individuals of our society.
Food items derived from animal sources have profound and detrimental effects universally. Firstly, their are excessively large number of species of sea animals, herbivores and carnivores, who have extinct due to hunting and a lot more are still under danger. Secondly, meals prepared from such origin are rich in fat contents that ultimately raises cholesterol levels all age groups. Such eating habits make elderly and young population groups more prone to obesity and enormous life threatening diseases. Finally, junk foods and seafoods are relatively expensive as compared to vegetables and legumes making them nearly impossible for low-paid community to afford.
On concluding, In my stance being a vegetarian has far more advantages. It not only favours yours mental and physical health but also has positive impacts on environment globally and protects various animal families from dyeing out. Ultimately this can help us in making planet earth a better place to live in.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...ference to their religious and cultural believes, fitness issues and certain other eleme...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...trimental effects universally. Firstly, their are excessively large number of species...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55182926829 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76185017768 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661585365854 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4222657099 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135259366717 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396447144564 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324424184841 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844326507947 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363188110819 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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