Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Art as a subject in school has been arguable topic. One portion of the world population believes art as a subject is just wastage of time, while others consider it as vital portion of human generation. In this essay, first will show how modern technology are replacing art, then will show how art helps children, then finally will present reasonable conclusion.
Modern technology has become indivisible part of the human life. We cannot think life without technology. For instance, computer literacy has become essential for everyone, and one who does not know how to handle computer is considered as illiterate. Due to this modernization, some argue that children should be taught technology related subject as they can help them for their career growth and earnings. From their point of view, traditional subjects like art are only wastage of time and worth to be replaced by technology related subjects.
On the flip side, art is very important part of the human life and always been a medium of expressing feelings specifically for children. For instance, child who always prefers their comfortable zone can express their feelings by means of painting. Apart from this, in this era of competition, while stress seems to be indivisible part of human race, arts can act as a way to release stress. For example, nowadays music therapy is used to cure depression. In addition to this, arts like dancing keeps child not only fit but also healthy.
To conclude, although arts subjects are essential for overall growth of a person, modern technology related subjects like science and mathematics are essential for career growth. In my opinion, although children should be taught all the subjects in primary education, they should be given choice to select subject in secondary education.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'apart from', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275229357798 0.247107183377 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.159021406728 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.085626911315 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0519877675841 0.0501214627716 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0305810397554 0.0437548338989 70% => OK
Prepositions: 0.14373088685 0.122226691241 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0489296636086 0.0403226058552 121% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70445402797 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0275229357798 0.0326793684256 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0489296636086 0.0861772015684 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0305810397554 0.021408717616 143% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0152905198777 0.011925033212 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1801.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 316.048096192 92% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16780821918 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383561643836 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294520547945 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208904109589 0.203846283523 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133561643836 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70445402797 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.037074148 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 57.4893303058 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.4666666667 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1721883341 49.517814964 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.066666667 127.492653851 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 48.9187214612 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.93670886076 1.69124875643 115% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242332970542 0.332605444948 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0915039533413 0.102741220458 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.054164838877 0.0668466124924 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.476088250814 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114646956847 0.148594505496 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858354136152 0.134430193775 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519655891476 0.0742795772207 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.243892255785 0.324371583561 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0641524239713 0.0638462369009 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152018979382 0.228012699653 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379568387268 0.058150111329 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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