Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Happiness depends on the psychology of a person but responsibility is inevitable for everyone. Some says teenagers are happiest people in the world but adults enjoy their time more than anyone else. Not only economical independence is the main reason of this, but also, the freedom of making choice is also another fact. Everyone, teen to adult, has to take responsibility. In my opinion, adult life is happiest part of human life regarding all aspects.
Firstly, teenagers have less economical freedom than a mature person. They generally have less opportunity to work and earn, whereas, an adult can earn and spend wherever he/she wants. For instance, if a youngster wants to buy a car, he may be questioned by his guardian but situation is totally opposite for a grown up person. So, a mature person is happier than a teen.
Secondly, independence of making choice is less visible among teen agers because of lack of experience, In case of an adult, he has the option to make his own selection without any barriers. For example, if an adult wants to travel any place, he can move there but for a juvenile, sometimes it is difficult. This situation can be an obstacles to be happy for this young people.
On contrary, taking more responsibility does not mean that a mature person will be less happy. Because more responsibility means more people are keeping trust on that particular person which brings happiness. A teen has less duty, which never ensures that he or she will be happy. A father’s responsibility to his family can be a good example of this. He becomes happy, if he can do his duties properly which is incomparable to anything.
In conclusion, both financial liberation and liberty of making choice have significant effect on becoming happy in life, only age does not matter much and there is little scope to lead a life without duties. I think that teenage age is blissful part of our life, which is full of good memories but adult life is most blissful experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the happiest'.
Suggestion: are the happiest
...table for everyone. Some says teenagers are happiest people in the world but adults enjoy th...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ir time more than anyone else. Not only economical independence is the main reason of this...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the happiest'.
Suggestion: is the happiest
...sponsibility. In my opinion, adult life is happiest part of human life regarding all aspect...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an obstacle' or simply 'obstacles'?
Suggestion: an obstacle; obstacles
... it is difficult. This situation can be an obstacles to be happy for this young people. On ...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat a mature person will be less happy. Because more responsibility means more people a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80969201295 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540935672515 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4695429404 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174732373573 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554279416338 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793771887462 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970363054269 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695354186696 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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