Some people think that when recruiting, companies should aim to take on people who are innovative and able to work independently while others considered they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions.Discuss both view and give your opnion.
My writing
It is thought by some that independence in working is the priority quality that every employer are looking for. On the other hand, people who can easily work in a team are said to be the necessary ones. From my point of view, I won't take side and be persuaded that eadiness of changes is the most crucial one.
On the one hand, we need to admit that every job, every environment requires employees to be able to work as a team. Getting along with others and together take part in a job give them a moral support to have the best productivity. Furthemore,teamwork skill helps us a lot in getting on good terms with other partner so as to build a comfortable and effective place which incentive to us to be creative.Lastly, it helps every employee has to shape themselves to be an important and necessary part to make the succeed.
On the other hand, a job has a variety kind of works, the employees not only have to work in a group frequently but they need to solve their problems on their own as well. It is obvious that nobody can help and decide for our life everything in the long run.In a short time, we will have to depend on our abilities to come to the solution and decision for the job. Thus, people who can arrange their job independently is considered to be more qualified.
In my opinion, nobody is perfect so that it is impossible for find the people who are excellent in both of demands. The employers need to accept the correspondence of people but I strongly believe they need put priority over the people who are not afraid of changes, difficulties and persistent.
In conclusion, teamwork skill and independence are two of the most crucial qualities of a good employee but people who have strong passion for job, studying and never give up are the brightest candidates for any vacancy
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...etting on good terms with other partner so as to build a comfortable and effective place...
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Suggestion: Lastly
...ce which incentive to us to be creative.Lastly, it helps every employee has to shape t...
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...an important and necessary part to make the succeed. On the other hand, a job has a var...
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...for our life everything in the long run.In a short time, we will have to depend on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, look, so, thus, well, as to, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56534954407 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78415470963 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510638297872 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.528253928 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.166666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4166666667 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240755104731 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997964302526 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690978888719 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142303848569 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610841421271 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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