Some people think that women should be able to do whatever job they are qualified for including police work, while others think that is it wrong to allow woman to become police officers.
What is your opinion?
Some people believe that women could do any kind of job if they are capable for that; however some other ones considered that the type of the job should be appropriate for the gender. I agree with the first group, everyone would be able to do any kind of job if they trained for and become professional in that field. In this essay, I will discuss the reason of the agreement with the first group.
Although women are known as much calmer person than men, they can do the violent job as well. Woman because of their role as a mother, are known so kind and known as a person who brings calmness to the family but, that does not mean they cannot do some kind of job such as becoming a police officer hence it is violent. For example, in our country, we have many successful women who are working in the police station and acting against the criminals. To sum up, it is not true to separate some kind of job for male and female just because the majority of female might not be keen to do that job.
The other reason to support my idea is that, if people are able to do something, they absolutely train for that job. It means that, first of all, anybody could be a police officer if they were trained for being an officer. Secondly, they would improve in that field if they practised a lot. So there is no relation between the gender and chose the job or the gender or be a professional. To sum up, practising and training can make anyone a professional in any kind of the job and no matter the person is man or woman.
In conclusion, a group of people are in favour of that woman are able to do any kind of the job such as police officer and the other group believe that some jobs are not suitable for women.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'such as', 'first of all', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217877094972 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.156424581006 0.155533422707 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0754189944134 0.0946595960268 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.036312849162 0.0501214627716 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0474860335196 0.0437548338989 109% => OK
Prepositions: 0.148044692737 0.122226691241 121% => OK
Participles: 0.0279329608939 0.0403226058552 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.20787075322 2.80594681477 79% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0251396648045 0.0326793684256 77% => OK
Particles: 0.00558659217877 0.00163938923432 341% => OK
Determiners: 0.134078212291 0.0861772015684 156% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0279329608939 0.021408717616 130% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00837988826816 0.011925033212 70% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1715.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 328.0 316.048096192 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22865853659 6.12580529183 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20517956788 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.246951219512 0.374742101984 66% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.149390243902 0.28420135186 53% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0823170731707 0.203846283523 40% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0426829268293 0.137316102897 31% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.20787075322 2.80594681477 79% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448170731707 0.56093040696 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.6477430017 60.7387585426 74% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 25.2307692308 20.7743622355 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5479596621 49.517814964 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.923076923 127.492653851 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7743622355 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 0.814263465372 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 40.169793621 49.1944974215 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.63953488372 1.69124875643 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317959398483 0.332605444948 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.176459574817 0.102741220458 172% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.11846327379 0.0668466124924 177% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.586570087996 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180493652239 0.148594505496 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158202211589 0.134430193775 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981026350043 0.0742795772207 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395410126868 0.324371583561 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0153978056842 0.0638462369009 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249458481792 0.228012699653 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262536730588 0.058150111329 45% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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