SOME SAY GOOD TEACHERS ARE IMPORTANT FOR SUCCESSFUL EDUCATION, WHILE OTHERS SAY THE ATTITUDE OF A STUDENT IS MRORE IMPORTANT. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.
To be a successful person in this competitive world, a rich education plays a vital role. In my opinion, to have a good tutor is not enough for the efficacious education. But, the approach of the student is also required to achieve that level.
Some proportion of folk accord that, there are only teachers who is responsible behind the top education. To support this statement there are multifarious reasons. Firstly, without teachers a student cannot learn new things. Because knowledge is not limited, you can get it from any source but the preachers are the one who can explain them in better way. Secondly, the teachers are the one who is responsible for to guide a student in a correct direction because in early age, the children will follow what their teachers tell them to do.
On the other side of people assert that, the behavioral approach is more important of any student to achieve wealthy education. For an instance, if a good teacher tried hard to explain topic to any one student but that student does not show any interest towards study then there is no matter how well a tutor teaching. So, an attitude also plays a salient role to achieve successful education.
To recapitulate, I want to conclude that for a crowned education not only the teachers but the individual perspective is also necessary.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206349206349 0.247107183377 84% => OK
Verbs: 0.146825396825 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107142857143 0.0946595960268 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0634920634921 0.0501214627716 127% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0277777777778 0.0437548338989 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0873015873016 0.122226691241 71% => OK
Participles: 0.00396825396825 0.0403226058552 10% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.7247185705 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.047619047619 0.0326793684256 146% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.146825396825 0.0861772015684 170% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015873015873 0.021408717616 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0198412698413 0.011925033212 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1325.0 1933.35771543 69% => OK
No of words: 227.0 316.048096192 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83700440529 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20517956788 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.343612334802 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286343612335 0.28420135186 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.189427312775 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118942731278 0.137316102897 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7247185705 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.037074148 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559471365639 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.3413696086 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9166666667 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3957083132 49.517814964 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.416666667 127.492653851 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.7743622355 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 47.5510279001 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.25 1.69124875643 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258809080581 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115769375631 0.102741220458 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0705385683441 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.56093623553 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.198539508193 0.148594505496 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116072683363 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539094567047 0.0742795772207 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293571581514 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0280034878821 0.0638462369009 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175724255259 0.228012699653 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026952211743 0.058150111329 46% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.