In some societies, it is becoming more common for fathers to stay at home and take care of the children while mothers go to work. Why is this happening? Is it positive or negative development?
It is certainly true that amount of women who come back to work as soon as possible after giving birth has risen over past few decades. There are several reasons why this issue has arisen. This essay will discuss root causes of above-mentioned problem and will put forward the notion that this trend is undoubtedly positive.
The matter why females go to work instead of their male counterparts has been caused by a number of factors. The main explanation is that in modern world every employee has to struggle for his workplace. Unfortunately, even strict labor laws cannot help in this situation. Another reason why the issue occurs in this way is that often salary of child’s father is less than woman’s one. An illustrative example of this is that recent researches has proven that it is a new life standard in Western countries when women work alone in family.
The main reason why this phenomenon is positive is that it broadens the opportunity for females to become skillful specialists without any gaps in their career. Not only can women acquire new knowledge through years of bringing up the children, but they can also apply them in their work. Another reason why it is a good development is that this helps to stabilize or even enlarge the family budget. Therefore, these types of families are stronger than “paternalistic”, traditional ones.
In conclusion, my opinion that women go to work and do not want to sit at home raising children because of the modern world labor system and due to the fact that it helps to supply family finances. After analyzing the subject it has become quite evident that this is a positive tendency since there are strong grounds for subscribing to this point of view. It has become quite evident that women can acquire knowledge that changes rapidly nowadays as well as they can
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Suggestion:
...ges rapidly nowadays as well as they can
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9076433121 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83355208252 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573248407643 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.960101347 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.733333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224152671182 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700833201711 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425405561446 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132811638196 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313469913891 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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