A University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
It is thought by some people that higher educational facilities ought to select equal quantity of students of oppose genders for studying every subject. There are variety of aspects that causes this situation and I totally disagree with this statement.
There is only one main advantage in male and female equality. Psychologists say that students being in their young age will get used to an opposite sex and this indisputably benefit their future matrimonial relationship. The boys have been studying among large quantity of girls for five years of educational process are more likely to get the happiest marriage.
However, there is no reason to select students for particular subject considering the gender only. The matter is that boys are more inclined to some areas of studying and the girls should not be permitted to peculiar specialties. To give a clear example, women won’t be able to work in building branches due their physical restrictions. They are not physically strong as men. Thus, men are not likely to work in nursing or sewing.
Moreover, it’s a well-known fact that students are the future of a country. Many of them will allowed to manage the whole country. I think, men are more successful in this case. And we also should remember that increased quota for women will impact allowed quantity of male students. As a result, we will get a tougher competition between enrollees.
In conclusion, I’d like to say that management of university ought to consider personal knowledge of particular subjects of every student, regardless his or her gender. History has approved many times that women could efficient in every area of studying. We need to exclude any chance for gender discrimination.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 100, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'allow'
Suggestion: allow
... future of a country. Many of them will allowed to manage the whole country. I think, m...
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Line 7, column 108, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'managing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: managing
...of a country. Many of them will allowed to manage the whole country. I think, men are mor...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.221875 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.171875 0.155533422707 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103125 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046875 0.0501214627716 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.046875 0.0437548338989 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11875 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.040625 0.0403226058552 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81483455942 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.040625 0.0326793684256 124% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.078125 0.0861772015684 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.028125 0.021408717616 131% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.003125 0.011925033212 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1738.0 1933.35771543 90% => OK
No of words: 282.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16312056738 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.375886524823 0.374742101984 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.297872340426 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.234042553191 0.203846283523 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127659574468 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81483455942 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.037074148 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59219858156 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 63.5356702386 60.7387585426 105% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6666666667 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6290430087 49.517814964 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.814263465372 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 45.4539007092 49.1944974215 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.43529411765 1.69124875643 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236604222503 0.332605444948 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0802503433561 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0719929910194 0.0668466124924 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.4893752611 0.534860350844 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135149211843 0.148594505496 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809862379304 0.134430193775 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424181174234 0.0742795772207 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.245352758528 0.324371583561 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0327840980921 0.0638462369009 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143778912886 0.228012699653 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230873475288 0.058150111329 40% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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