We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependencies on computers a good thing or should we have more auspicious about their benefits?
Nowadays, we live in a world in which technology dominated all aspects of human's lives and everyone is too dependent on computers in fulfilling the daily tasks. Computers are used not only in business, army, aviation industry and the like, but also they will be used in genetic engineering in the future. It is believed that relying on computers has some pros and cons but the benefits by far out weight the drawbacks.
The most determinant aspect of computer usage is their accuracy in doing the jobs. They can do all tasks with fewer defects while individuals are more feasible to make faults due to tiredness or racing-thoughts which can cause some difficulties in focusing on what they are expecting to do. In addition, computers could enhance the speed of accomplishing the tasks in working ambiences with escalating the archiving process or printing the documents and the like. To support my claim I can refer to an article, having been published in Times magazine, mentioned that computers could make the office works faster up to 60% in 2007.
Technology has the ability to change things for the better in the future and it can be used in various issues such as health and treatment. In the future, computers will be a good assistant for genetic engineers who are manipulating the genes of organisms. Computers will aid to accelerate the developments in curing the ailments by analyzing the blood samples and depicting the DNA charts which will result in less genetic based illnesses in newborn babies or find medicines for diseases such as cancers. It is proved as a result of a research has done in Britain, which indicates that severe diseases such as breast cancer will be rooted out by 2020.
To sums up, although computers caused some unemployment in societies, they bring lots of benefits in treatments and medical developments. Besides, they can be beneficial in facilitating the daily tasks.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...as cancers. It is proved as a result of a research has done in Britain, which indicates th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, while, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98130841121 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81780824112 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576323987539 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6930046837 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253182528893 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818329527943 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592647695029 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139647174393 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501866001109 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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