Agree or Disagree: In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising.
There are various reasons for become successful in a business; however, the presence of some factors are accounted as of the absolute necessities in the path of prosperity. A plethora of people is in the conviction that investment on advertisement brings accomplishment for the business. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that aware management, appropriate funding, and other elements a play crucial role in this regard. I am of the opinion that, advertising has a variety of advantages for the company, and the following explanation will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, there are some factors which become an integral part of today’s world. Undoubtedly, branding and popularity is very important issue for modern people. Indeed, they have tendency toward buying the things that are known as the best, no matter whether it is really the best material that they can have with that amount of money or not. It is where the role of advertisement is defined as the key contribution in order to familiarize public with the product in the first stage, and promote them that this product can be the best thing that anyone wants to have. Consequently, no one can overlook the extent of importance of ads in this circumstance.
Another vital fact that should be taken into consideration is that the role of promotion is not restricted to conscious actions such as when one person watch a TV advertising. In fact, the majority of these promotions affect on people unintently. It means that a person does not know why he opt one product rather than another one, although they are seemingly alike. Therefore, business should utilize these strategies to influence deeply in their users mind. Admittedly, getting the desire result is not as easy as it seems, and the business will not achieve to send its massage to its target in a society without having expertise individuals who guide the process of adverting in its favourable way .
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that advertising is an undeniable segment for each successful business because it helps the company that not only represent the product and the name of it but also unconsciously effect on people’s mindset about purchasing their productions. Of course, eliminating the other contributed factors will not a wise option as it is the total elements which leads to success.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'in fact', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235294117647 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.142533936652 0.158761421928 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0701357466063 0.0866891130778 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0542986425339 0.046263068375 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0429864253394 0.0685040099705 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142533936652 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0316742081448 0.0351676179071 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94194384275 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0180995475113 0.0309702414327 58% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.12443438914 0.0887237588012 140% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0180995475113 0.0209618222197 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0248868778281 0.0139019557991 179% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2419.0 2387.08602151 101% => OK
No of words: 399.0 408.028673835 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0626566416 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48200974243 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.368421052632 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28320802005 0.251872472559 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19298245614 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142857142857 0.112833075102 127% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94194384275 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5664160401 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 66.0491485424 59.2087087015 112% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 24.9375 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3970622348 48.84282405 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.1875 120.699889404 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 53.258302005 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.70754716981 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166219900526 0.300154397459 55% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0989772903777 0.103427244359 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0870905178127 0.0752933317313 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525408847443 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192618711836 0.151897553556 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767562998056 0.114077575197 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044389942217 0.0781384742642 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.424789787703 0.336927656856 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0631346074908 0.067059652881 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125368926067 0.210909579961 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303393197071 0.0618886996521 49% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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