Agree/Disagree:It's better for children choose jobs that are similar to their parent' jobs than to choose job that are very different from their parents' jobs.
Truth be told, whether children should choose jobs similar to their parents' jobs or not has generated alot of controversy recently. The notion that it is best that children should either choose jobs that are similar to their parents or continue their business is a fascinating one and one that I believe in. In the following paragraphs I will mention the remarkable benefits of choosing a similar job to their parents' jobs for children.
First and foremost, children can work for their parents when they are growing up. Working for parents has several advantages. Firstly, children can work part-time and they can obtain a good deal of money. Secondly, they can only work in summer time, when they are less engaged with their education. In this respect, most of companies do not accept part time workers neither do they employ a person only for summer. For instance, my cousin used to work in his father's garage for two or three hours a day. Who else would hire a worker to work for only two hours a day other than his parent? Finally, when children grow up, they can find a job which is similar to their experience more easily, providing that they already have a lot of experience in that job.
Moreover, another aspect of working for parents or in jobs similar to them, is the ability to exploit parents' experience. Chances are parents who have a job, are also experts in it, since they have been in the job for many years. For this reason, they can provide their children with a lot of knowledge and information regarding their own job if it similar to that of their childrens'. Take me as an example. Me and my father are both computer engineers. When I confront a problem in my work, my father is always there for me, and he provides me with beneficial information regarding the problem.
Admiteddly, not to mention higher chances of success would be an oversight. When children continue their parents' business or they choose a similar career, they are more likely to succeed. If children continue their parents' business when they become adults, they do not need a considerable amount of money to invest in a new business. Furthermore, children do not need to form new business connections, because the network is already there, and they can exploit the existing business relationships to their benefit. For example, child of a renowned salesperson may continue selling products to all of his parent's costumers.
All in all, choosing jobs similar to parents brings about several merits to children. In this regard, they can grow up with a lot of practical experience as well as use their parents' experience and achievements to have a higher chance of success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
... money. Secondly, they can only work in summer time, when they are less engaged with their ...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the companies') or simply say ''most companies''.
Suggestion: most of the companies; most companies
... with their education. In this respect, most of companies do not accept part time workers neither...
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Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...espect, most of companies do not accept part time workers neither do they employ a person...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81739130435 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60612191879 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452173913043 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 5.0 0.994623655914 503% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6069572174 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351602573591 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130350778359 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115520477071 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248572711967 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114977180893 0.0645574589148 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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