Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well.
Nowadays, people live in different ways in comparison to the past. One of the reasons of these changes because of the development in technology. Many people deem that people are busy doing so many different things, so they do very few things well. On the other hand, other people hold an opposite view. Although the number of the controversies over this issue is overwhelming, I agree with this idea that in spite of the busy life that today people have it, they can do different things very well. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into the outstanding reasons.
To begin with, the first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the advance the technology help people a lot to do many things in a short time. Due to this fact, people experience various things in their lives and can improve their dissimilar abilities so that this development enables them to do a lot of things as well as possible without any problems. Take myself as an example, I use the new software that they help me to learn my studies very good and also I use computer games in my free time. Thus, it is obvious that the modern technology help people spend a short time to do different things in the best way.
Second, there is another reason deserves some words. In today's world, education is an open corridor to success in life. To clarify, people spend their time to study and improve their various talents that universities provide a good condition for them. Therefore, they have enough knowledge and experience to do different thing very well. To illustrate, I take my sister as an example. She got a lot of experience when she was a student in a college. Not only could she be successful in her field but also she passed various courses like painting. Hence, she is a successful doctor and paints beautiful pictures now. Thus, I am strongly in the belief that it is necessary that people pay for their educations which capable them to do many things well.
All main points considered, it appears to be good to draw a reasonable conclusion that today it is easy that people can do a lot of things in the best way. To summarize the reasons, people can do unlike things not only because of advances in technology but also that the educational institutions provide situations for them and they are very experts in distinctive aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ople deem that people are busy doing so many different things, so they do very few things well...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 410.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67804878049 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49982852243 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61329142807 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482926829268 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 605.7 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5184840131 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3333333333 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5238095238 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.503697963313 0.236089414692 213% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141654960256 0.076458572812 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.193999833726 0.0737576698707 263% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.331444442987 0.150856017488 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159320328387 0.0645574589148 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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