The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Nowadays, People tend to go to the different countries and traveling is helpful to know about other countries like their cultures, historical places, and languages. Even if people want to travel to various cities of their countries, they will learn interesting points about them. Many people deem that travel in a group which led by a tour guide is the best way of traveling. However, other people hold an opposite view. Not surprisingly, the number of controversies over this issue is overwhelming. Among the two opinions, I agree with the former one more. In the following paragraphs, I delve into the most outstanding reasons which persuade me to put forward this perspective.
To begin with, the first exquisite point to be mentioned is that when people travel with each other as a group, they enjoy a lot to connect with each other. In other words, if people make friends in a group, which want to travel, they will take many advantages like speaking together during a trip. Also, they can share different things such as food and it makes wonderful memories for them. Take myself as an example, when I and my friends went to the Kish by airplane, I helped one of my friends to relax in the airplane because she faced a lot of stress in the airplane. We could go to the different place like swimming pool so that travel with a group is very enjoyable.
Second, there is another reason deserves some words here. If people go on a trip and have a tour guide, they will not worry about unknown things, due to this person familiar with the place and people who live in that place. For this reason, passengers do not have a problem to connect with local people, if they do not know about their cultures and languages. Take my sister as an example, a few years ago, she and her friends went to the Brazil as a group with a tour guide. My sister is an English teacher so that she thought that she did not have a problem to talk with people but, she found out this fact that many people in the Brazil do not understand an English language. Therefore, the tour guide could help them a lot and they enjoy to visit different places with his guiding.
To wrap it up, from what I discussed above, I safely come to this conclusion that traveling in a group with a tour guide is a better way than alone. Not only can people have a happy time with together but also they easily learn about the culture and beautiful places of another country or city with leading a tour guide. Therefore, I insist that people travel with these conditions because they will enjoy more and do not have a problem during the travel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to interest'.
Suggestion: to interest
...ies of their countries, they will learn interesting points about them. Many people deem tha...
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Line 5, column 737, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'enjoy visiting'.
Suggestion: enjoy visiting
...ur guide could help them a lot and they enjoy to visit different places with his guiding. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 472.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53177966102 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40409162228 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472457627119 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1701014976 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4761904762 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38095238095 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223600636517 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754858331746 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112742162201 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152219861874 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555093030671 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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