A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
When it comes to the issue what you need to build in your town, some people believe that they need to build a factory in their neighborhood, and their will vote this plan because of its advantages. However, others maintain the opposite view, and they pay more attention to its bad pints like pollutions. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account the following reasons.
The first and most important reason is that a factory brings new job opportunities for residents. Nowadays, we have witnessed the unemployment is a serious crisis not only in the poor countries, but also in the developed countries. In this way, it is quite normal great deals of juveniles in the small towns are seeking the job. Building a factory makes a more vocation in city and most of young people can work in it. All in all, building a factory decreases not only the rate of unemployment but also the rate of migration.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. People who live here will possess a better life conditions. In the one hand, industries companies and factory have an obligation to pay the percent of their revenue with local governments. Therefore, they are able to use these budgets for improve roads, parks, and so on. Generally, we will be seeing the great prodigies of fortune will accumulate in our town.
Apart from the points I made above there is building a factory bring more prospers for small business such as restaurant, shopping, and other business. I think that a small example can give some light to this topic. I remember that a few years ago, in my town were not any business, and people had to travel other city for finding a career. While, the condition changed after building an oil factory in there. Some of my friend could to work in the factory, other part of them build restaurants, shopping centers for getting service the factory employee.
Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that we obviously need more business like factories that they are willing to employee young people. Of course, as an English proverb goes “coin has two sides,” I know that we may face variety of pollution like water and air pollution. Nonetheless, I think that its benefits outweigh dangers. Last but not least, let us hope that all factories abide the standard regulations across the world.
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'apart from', 'i think', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23991507431 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.131634819533 0.158761421928 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0870488322718 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0467091295117 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0700636942675 0.0685040099705 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12101910828 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0212314225053 0.0351676179071 60% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6144377086 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212314225053 0.0309702414327 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.108280254777 0.0887237588012 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212314225053 0.0209618222197 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00636942675159 0.0139019557991 46% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2398.0 2387.08602151 100% => OK
No of words: 416.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76442307692 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307692307692 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247596153846 0.251872472559 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163461538462 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110576923077 0.112833075102 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6144377086 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567307692308 0.524397521467 108% => OK
Word variations: 67.1299311008 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0869565217 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2644083339 48.84282405 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.260869565 120.699889404 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0869565217 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.608695652174 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 42.8465719064 45.7405998639 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.53846153846 1.45489161554 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297851954765 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0670773368799 0.103427244359 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0564876737233 0.0752933317313 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.462770323192 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134866479299 0.151897553556 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952487380926 0.114077575197 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606561536358 0.0781384742642 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.248808288319 0.336927656856 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0448467525291 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18347923884 0.210909579961 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541229653786 0.0618886996521 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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