A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
Different people may respond to this question differently. But if it comes to me my answer will strongly depend on the type of factory. Creating factory in a place could have many influences on surrounding. The type of effects are highly related to the type of factory. Depending on the type of factory this question could have both positive and negative answers. To make my response more clearer, I will provide wide range of reasons to support my idea.
Firstly, apparently, it seems to be helpful for people who live around the factory. They can get a job in that factory. And in this way unemployment will reduced. Depending on the size of the factory, it can employ a huge number of young people. Needles to say that it could be very helpful for people who inhabit around the factory. In spite of this reason, factory could be a danger for other factories and organizations that have worked in that place by absorbing their workers. And it could be a new challenge for people who live around.
Secondly, factory could affect environment considerably. It could pollute air, water sources significantly. In many cases factories is a great danger for people who live around. Therefore, for providing precise answer to the topic, it is necessary to have sufficient information about the factory. Knowing important things such as how factory works? What products it will produce? how it could pollute the environment?, and etc. these helpful information will make me aware about the side effects of building the factory and can able us to make appropriate decision.
Apart from two previous reasons, it should be added that factory could absorb many people from other places and in this way the population will suddenly grow up. To me, I don’t like to inhabit in such crowded place.
All in all, I conclude that the exact answer to the topic question is strongly depend on the type of the factory, if it could be a danger for environment that I’m living there, my answer would be negative. And again if it could damage other organizations and factories my opinion will be negative.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have many influences on surrounding. The type of effects are highly related to th...
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Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'clearer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: clearer
...d negative answers. To make my response more clearer, I will provide wide range of reasons t...
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Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...tory. And in this way unemployment will reduced. Depending on the size of the factory, ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
...y works? What products it will produce? how it could pollute the environment?, and ...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... how it could pollute the environment?, and etc. these helpful information will make me ...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
...nswer to the topic question is strongly depend on the type of the factory, if it could...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, apart from, such as, in many cases, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 9.8082437276 245% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86033519553 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68346068881 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466480446927 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.103757552 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.32 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908660449906 0.236089414692 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316590627672 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355156162016 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572619927991 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215250844979 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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