A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position
The construction of a new factory near my community would have the tremendous effect on the people who live in here. The new factory undoubtedly could be economically advantageous for the locals and for the residents of the neighboring towns. Therefore, I would definitely support the construction.
First of all, the rise of a new industry in my town would create new employment. Indeed, every factory needs a myriad of employees to operate it. Moreover, not only professionals but also unskilled workers could be demanded on the factory. For example, college students of my community could work part-time shifts on the facility and this way, pay for their college tuition. It would be especially a great opportunity to obtain education for those young people whose parents are not able to support their education. If the young people can afford a college and obtain a profession, they have a great chance to excel in life. To that end, the building of a factory could provide students with a job and contribute to the success of their future.
Secondly, a factory could facilitate to the overall development of the community. As soon as the new industry has to hire plenty of people to run the factory, new businesses could be evolved to serve all these employees. To be clear, the workers of the factory have to eat, drink and fuel their vehicles. To satisfy these requirements, new grocery stores, restaurants, and gas stations could be opened next to the factory. In turn, the new businesses would provide even more jobs for the local residents and for people from adjacent communities. Besides, together with the commercial development, the social life of the community could be improved - new schools and hospitals could be built. So, there is no doubt that the idea of the new construction has the great potential for the town to progress.
Although the factory can negatively affect the environment and have some drawbacks such as air and noise pollutions, as well as the probability for traffic jams, the economical satisfaction of the local people and increased quality of life will eventually overweight the flaws.
To conclude, if a new factory has announced to be built in my community, I would be vehemently promoting the construction. This is because the company could provide valuable job opportunities and contribute to the economic and social progression of the town. All things considered, the construction would be beneficial for the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2064.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07125307125 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96941913835 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488943488943 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2462189476 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.80952380952 5.45110844103 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139617881152 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527921671097 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417982548001 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957096560389 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427503628947 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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