Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?
Now we are in the 21st century which is very beneficial for us in all perspective. Everyone is satisfied with their life style. Nowadays we are enjoyed comfortable and luxury life as compare to our parent life when they were children.
We are really satisfied with all facilities which are available nowadays. Facilities like fast and cheap transportation , different form of entertainment (like movie, dram, daily serial, comedy shows), immediate and secure medical service. All these services make our life more easy , fast and comfort than our parent life. They have to struggle lot to get all these services. Only some of them can able to achieve that all services at that time. Is was very difficult to them to get fast and secure services. so these scenario we are luck than our parent.
Moreover, As we luck in technology services but we are unlucky to keep our environment clean and fresh. We are lagging out natural resources like crude oil, natural gas. we seem to be in danger after some period. Our next generation will get affect because we deplete all natural resources very fast. When our parent were children that time is was not a scenario . Everybody get fresh air, fresh and rich water. less pollution less stress. In this case our parent was luck.
Finally ,I conclude that,for our next generation they must get secure ,fast,comfort and pollution free life. Which means that combination of both life.
Comments
I follow your comments and
I follow your comments and try to avoid it in next essay.I think it seem to be less effective. How should I improve my grammar. I really want to do it as soon as possible.
I know all English grammar rule. I have completed English speaking class,which covered all English Grammar rules. so I feel why should I spend my time to read it again.I think I am lagging in how to apply it.
Please provide me guideline how I improve my English written and speaking as soon as possible.
It is not enough to only take
It is not enough to only take grammar class. You need to apply those grammar rules to your essays and speakings by practice.
We have checked out all of your grammar errors. They are not big issues but they are repeated in all of your essays. It means you didn't catch those grammars exactly. Basically, you need to keep those issues in mind and don't repeat mistakes at next essays.
Well, unfortunately, there are no magic cures which could remove your issues suddenly and completely, you will have to follow the suggestions we gave to you step by step to do some practising even it will take some times to be effective.
A quick tip for you may help you somehow if you can follow it:
after you write one sentence, can you guarantee that the sentence is 100% correct without grammar issues? if not, you have to think twice.
Usually, you have half an hour to write an essay, but you can put one hour or more to finish one essay since this will take time.
Let's see if this tip will help to improve grammar.
Everyone is satisfied with their life style.
Everyone is satisfied with his life style.
Nowadays we are enjoyed comfortable and luxury life as compare to our parent life when they were children.
Nowadays we are enjoyed comfortable and luxury life as compared to our parent life when they were children.
Only some of them can able to achieve that all services at that time.
Only some of them are able to achieve that all services at that time.
we are luck than our parent.
we are more lucky than our parent.
As we luck in technology services
As we are lucky in technology services
When our parent were children that time is was not a scenario
When our parent were children, it was not a scenario at that time
Everybody get fresh air
Everybody gets fresh air
In this case our parent was luck.
In this case our parent was lucky.
Which means that combination of both life.
Which means a combination of both life.
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.235 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.734 7.5
No. of Grammatical Errors: 9 2
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No. of Words: 242 350
Minimum 250 words wanted.
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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Average Word Length: 4.711 4.6
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No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
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Sentence Length SD: 4.734 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.362 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.538 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.199 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5