Do you agree of disagree with following statement?
A person should never make an important decision alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Modern life has a lot of problem what people must decide such as attending university, choosing jobs, marring, ... It is argued that a person should not make any important decision alone. In my opinion, I believe that deciding by myself is essential and has important role in my life.
People who never decide any important issues alone will have risk of missing some skills. I mean when people do everything depend on decision of many other people, they will not have change to fulfillment themselves. People cannot decide alone will not have ability independent. If you always wait the decision of other people to follow, you gradually depend on others. As a result, you even cannot do anything alone, both important things and simple things. More importantly, you also do not have your viewpoint. when any problems come to you, you will wait for helping of others, you cannot decide because you do not know how to decide and what you want, I mean here you do not know what is your opinion to make decision. Of course, there are no companies want to hire employees who cannot make any decision alone. This will influence a lot of in your future job.
Additionally, it is a fact that there are a lot of issue that people must do it alone. Nobody can help and make decision instead of themselves. For example, when you want to marry a person. Choosing who will be your husband or your wife is your issue. This problem you must do it by yourself and no one can do it for you. I mean when you decide to marry a person, the reason is because you love that person and you cannot live without that person. What will be happened if you decide who you marry depend on concluding of other people? If your mother does not like her/him, your friends do not like her/him too, what will you do? Will you not marry her/him? In life, there are a lot of problems that people must make their own viewpoint. No one can decide instead of themselves. Therefore, having ability of making decision alone is very important for each people.
Some people can say that when many people gather and decide, those concluding will be more effective and more exactly. It is true but not true in every situation. In fact, there are many situation that decision of many people is wrong. For instance, war is crucial of many people and it is very bad decision of course.
In conclusion, I want to repeat the important of making decision alone. It is skill that everybody must have if they want to live with themselves and have more opportunities in both the future jobs and the future positions. There is no boss make adjudicate depend on decision of other people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
Modern life has a lot of problem what people must decide such as attendi...
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Line 2, column 514, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...y, you also do not have your viewpoint. when any problems come to you, you will wait...
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Line 3, column 375, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...ou decide to marry a person, the reason is because you love that person and you cannot liv...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'many situations'.
Suggestion: many situations
... in every situation. In fact, there are many situation that decision of many people is wrong. ...
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Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...very situation. In fact, there are many situation that decision of many people is wrong. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i mean, in conclusion, in fact, of course, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 9.8082437276 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57505285412 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3970664298 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.399577167019 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 704.7 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Interrogative: 4.0 0.994623655914 402% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6440373491 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8064516129 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2580645161 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.74193548387 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265678982915 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841302711883 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686789389011 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149116758105 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736432917056 0.0645574589148 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.48 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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