Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Considering the word advertisement, it provokes many concepts among different people. Some might consider it a positive tool in the fate of a country, while others may think of it unquestionably a reason of conflict. As far as I am concerned, I adopt a firm position which will support the statement that commercials are absolutely a reflection of a country. There are many reasons for this perspective but I will discuss only the primary ones here.
Beginning with the fact that advertising depicts a country's culture and customs. Indeed, some people have certain reservations regarding some particular type of commercial, for its negative impact on the society. However in most cases, these are one of the efficient ways of public communication. I would like to add an example here to further illustrate my viewpoint. I remember, when I was in elementary school, one of my cousins came from Canada to visit us in my country, Pakistan. As he was visiting us for the first time, he had very little knowledge about my country, but soon he got to know a lot from our television programs. This in turn, made him decide to visit our northern cities for its simple and pristine life. He was so impressed by our tradition that he bought overseas channels when he got back to Canada. Similarly, I can recollect that media serves as an educative tool. Consequently, I can safely assume that without these variety of television shows my cousin could have had such positive impact. Considerably, this is the reason which makes this opinion stronger and explains this idea complete that advertising is a direct way of conveying a country's tradition.
There is another factor which deserves few words. The advertising helps understand the development of a country. Certainly, there are many private channels in a country, which are owned by some wealthy people and can be very advanced in technicalities, but the national channels utilize the state fund and best represent the true picture of country's progress. For instance, several years beck, television commercials in my country used to be very old fashioned, in terms of graphics, editing, and even the settings for a commercial. However, in few years, there has been a progressive inclination of youth towards media education. This has made a noticeable difference in the field of telecommunication and it has become much more advanced now. When today, I compare channels of some developed countries with that of mine, I do not find much difference. Presumably, this has been possible just because of the advent of the technology, and the best representation to portray this development is the television commercials. This example clearly solidifies the dominance of my opinion that advertising play an important role in representing a country's growth.
By way of conclusion, based on the ideas explored above, I am of the opinion that in most cases, advertisement may seem insignificant to some people but it serves as a key stone in telecommunication. Not only does it reflect a country's traditional values but it also educates the world at large. For these reasons, I strongly support the statement that commercials really tell about a country. Therefore, in my opinion, a person should value the importance of advertisement for the betterment of his country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, really, regarding, similarly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in most cases, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2771.0 1977.66487455 140% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08440366972 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11371010862 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528440366972 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 891.0 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3420631578 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9642857143 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4642857143 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140209135828 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382322090163 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427636144892 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903336628022 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171842915837 0.0645574589148 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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