Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Grades marks encourage students to learn Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The grades are an important part of the school testing system. some might disagree with this statement because it might seem unfair to a lot of people, that a student's ability to be tested only by grades achieved during schooling. but in most of the schools, the grades are essential for proving your worth in this competitive system.

First, it makes the study competitive and encourages the students to do better. some may have the idea that grades do not help a student in getting better because not all students have the aspiration to do good in the educational field. Hence, grades become a less important reason in some of these scenarios. Although, getting good grades becomes a driving factor for a lot of students as they find it very rewarding and it motivates them to give their best in the examinations and all the other fields. A student getting better grades gets much more appreciation equally from their teachers, peers and parents, and gives us a sense of satisfaction.

The grades help to decide one's place in his/her studies. though for some, it really isn't a big factor as they are less interested in grades or perhaps they study hard but just do not like the examination setting as a result, even though they study well, they are somehow unable to give their best in that setting. However, usually, it tells a student how much work they need to put in and in what fields they need to work more to improve their performance. For example, during my schooling I got very poor grades in Chemistry and it drove me to spend more time on the subject compared to other subjects as a result, my grades improved over time and as a result, my overall grades were better.

Finally, good grades speak for themselves about a student's performance when it comes to higher studies and job recruitment. I agree that a lot of the jobs are looking for other properties in their employees, such as the managing skills or the soft skills of an applicant when it comes to a managerial post. but in most cases, it is preferred that the person has a good knowledge base in the field they are applying for a job and the grades become one of the deciding factors for the recruitment process. I recall the time when I attended an interview for a position which required knowledge of the machines used in the factory and my grades showed the recruiters that I have the necessary knowledge in the required field.

Grading should be a part of the learning system as it has various outcome related importance when it comes to the real world and it also gives an insight into the person's intelligence and their drive for competition. they become an important aspect of a student's future endeavours.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, hence, however, look, may, really, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, in most cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 476.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67016806723 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58393710963 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468487394958 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.7016500068 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174336476519 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628444647472 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368299878602 0.0737576698707 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999313727317 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439713257355 0.0645574589148 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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