Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should encourage their children to do their homework independently rather than help them to do it.
Throughout history children and their raising has been great importance in society. Raising children in a good way will help society to improve and they will participate in the development of a nation. Some may hold a view that parents have to help their children with their homework. However, some may take the opposite point of view. I personally contend that children have to do their homework on their own. In the following paragraphs, outstanding reason will aptly illustrate my point of view.
First thing coming to mind is that by doing their homework alone, we let their confidence to boost. When we put a job in children shoulder and let them do their homework independantly, they start believing themselves and it will increase their confidence in their life in order to prepare them for their adult life. For example, when I was just 7 years old in my first year of school all my friends did their homework with help from their parrents. However, my parrents believe that I had to did my homework by myself, so I did my homework alone in almost all the time af my school's years. After a while I become more confidence that I can handle my job and assingment all alone. Years passed by and this feeling helped my to do my job and other assingnment in life perfectly thank to the confidence that I have attained. So this will help children in the long run.
Another equally important reason is that it will teach children how to plann their time and be on time. Doing a homework is an important task in children's childhood so they have to plan when to start they homework in order to complete it perfectly whithin time. This will teach them how to plan their life and their job consequently. For instance, as I describe before I had to do my homework on time and hand it over to teachers so I could get a full marked which was very important to me. It was important to me because I wanted to become a medical doctor one day and for that I had to earn highest score possible in all my courses. So I learn how to plan according to my homework. After a while I became a master planner in all aspect of my life, and this changed my life pathway and made me a great project planner. By this skill I am making my living on planning construction projects which is now my career intrest. So by leaving children with their homework they will earn and learn alot.
In short, all the aforementioned lead us to the conclusion that by leaving children with their homework we are helping them and indeed it is good for them to do their homework alone. They will earn confidence and planning skill by doing their homework which substanciate my point of view. However, that was a story in a nutshell; there are some other reason and examples, challenging the claim which is not mentioned above. All in all it is recommended that parrent apply a distant supervision over their performance in order to guid them into the right pathway.
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Discourse Markers used:
['consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in short']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.210526315789 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.171929824561 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0473684210526 0.0866891130778 55% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0438596491228 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.143859649123 0.0685040099705 210% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.117543859649 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0350877192982 0.0351676179071 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58516954254 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0438596491228 0.0309702414327 142% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0736842105263 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0228070175439 0.0209618222197 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0175438596491 0.0139019557991 126% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2948.0 2387.08602151 123% => OK
No of words: 531.0 408.028673835 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55178907721 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.48200974243 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.273069679849 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218455743879 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16384180791 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0847457627119 0.112833075102 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58516954254 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.414312617702 0.524397521467 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.7527205272 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4230769231 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4511368428 48.84282405 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 120.699889404 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4230769231 20.5533526081 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.644075263715 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 42.268651311 45.7405998639 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.00975609756 1.45489161554 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321168366632 0.300154397459 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141465857544 0.103427244359 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0979610192623 0.0752933317313 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470349773785 0.497263757937 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.114412439296 0.151897553556 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131107056605 0.114077575197 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985250659581 0.0781384742642 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.462594101974 0.336927656856 137% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0585159888953 0.067059652881 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258829291933 0.210909579961 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203800314938 0.0618886996521 33% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8870967742 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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