Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Life is not always about the things we like to do. Sometimes we have to do things which are not enjoyable. Although participating in pleasurable activities is desirable, in my view it is also necessary at times to do something we do not enjoy. The bases for my view are personal, social and financial.
Personally, doing things we don’t like improve our personality and help us become more mature. For instance, when parents have their first baby they are forced to give up their freedom in order to take care of their baby. There are times when parents barely get enough sleep and still have to get up early in the morning and go to work. Similarly, university students have to spend a lot of time studying. In spite of being tempted to go out with friends and attend parties, those who have self-control and keep their priorities straight achieve high scores. Through such life experiences people become stronger, wiser and more responsible.
From a social perspective, we live in a society which imposes its obligations on us. Each person belongs to diverse social groups and plays various social roles. Each of us has to attend birthday parties, weddings and funerals to show we care about other people too. Participating in such events and conform to social norms teaches us to go beyond our own selfish needs.
Financially, people need to work long hours to keep local, national and international economy growing. We need to support our own family in particular and our community in general. In fact most of us work many more hours than we like to work. Only in this way are we able to live comfortable and save for our retirement days.
In conclusion, life places huge demands on us. By participating in a wide variety of events, both pleasant and unpleasant, we can learn about different aspects of life and improve ourselves in various ways.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, similarly, so, still, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in general, in particular, in my view, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81875 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70505891803 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571875 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2899365128 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15450205439 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508733478009 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669142735732 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833634275267 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796857020079 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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