Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Have you ever made an important decision of your own? Some people think that a person should never make an important decision alone. But other people think the opposite. However, in my opinion, I strongly think that a person should not make an essential decision alone because it makes you do not have good advice from others, can not listen to other’s experience and do not have a different perspective.
Firstly, making an important decision alone is not preferable because when you make a decision with other people who you trust, they can give you many good pieces of advice. For example, a year ago, when I finished grade 9, I had to choose a good school to study grade 10. I do not know many schools so that I cannot pick a good school to study by myself. Therefore, my parent gave me very great and correct advice. As a result of that, I am studying in a good school now. I appreciate my parent for that. Thus, when you ask for other advice, I think other people who you trust always willing to give you the best advice that they can make.
Secondly, making an essential decision alone is not better because when you discuss your problem with other people, they would share their own experience if they had done that before. You can draw your new experience for yourself from their experience. It can be better for you if you know how your decision will be when you decide like they had decided on their experience.
Finally, I think a person should not make an important decision alone is the right choice because you can hear many different perspectives from other people. I think that people can come up with many perspectives like a famous idiom, so many men, so many minds. So you can have more options to select your own decision. It may be extremely useful if you do not have many choices to choose.
In conclusion, making an essential decision alone is not a correct one. I believe that because you can have good advice, their own experience and different perspective from other people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 573, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'trust'.
Suggestion: always trust
...er advice, I think other people who you trust always willing to give you the best advice tha...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...s the right choice because you can hear many different perspectives from other people. I think...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'you know', 'as a result', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.1525 0.229887763892 66% => OK
Verbs: 0.16 0.158761421928 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1175 0.0866891130778 136% => OK
Adverbs: 0.085 0.046263068375 184% => Less adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.1275 0.0685040099705 186% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.1 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.015 0.0351676179071 43% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.40767804747 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0175 0.0309702414327 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0025 0.00188951952338 132% => OK
Determiners: 0.0625 0.0887237588012 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.04 0.0209618222197 191% => Try to use less modal verbs (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.02 0.0139019557991 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2016.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 360.0 408.028673835 88% => OK
Chars per words: 5.6 5.86048508987 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.308333333333 0.338922669872 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.202777777778 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.130555555556 0.174417080927 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0805555555556 0.112833075102 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40767804747 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.422222222222 0.524397521467 81% => OK
Word variations: 43.0584325518 59.2087087015 73% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8402308852 48.84282405 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 0.644075263715 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 38.2777777778 45.7405998639 84% => OK
Elegance: 0.718120805369 1.45489161554 49% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258382173988 0.300154397459 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125941988495 0.103427244359 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0872551880414 0.0752933317313 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.499193938016 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16598512304 0.151897553556 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102678659865 0.114077575197 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793323768 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.284532586151 0.336927656856 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0436064607637 0.067059652881 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175867515155 0.210909579961 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659767361363 0.0618886996521 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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