Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and example to support your opinion.
The school and university as an academic center the main responsibility, of which is to prepare students for having both a successful professional and personal life. The school and university forms a fundamental part of a person's education. Experiences acquired at academic settings make students decide their path. The quality of education is essential for development of science and technology. Indeed, not until education gets improved can the society progress. Bearing this fact in mind a question that is a matter of debate a controversial one is whether teachers should received their salary based on students learning process or not. Agreement is yet to be reached on this issue; however, I am personally on the belief that although teachers are important for students, the most important part for learning knowledge is students themselves. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons.
One compelling reason, lending credence to the stance taken above is that different teachers have different style, so it is hard to evaluate how well each teacher teaches according to how much students learn. Scientifically speaking, as nobody would have same character, teachers also have their own teaching style, such as strict or gentle and so forth. Probably, students of a strict teacher could give good result in their study, even though these teachers teach the same materials. Delving further into the issue reveals that we could not say that strict teacher should be paid higher than the gentle teacher should, since we know that students have learned more because they were afraid. In fact, this trend will discourage teachers and they should be judged based on their performance, sometimes they get too many courses or do not have good background knowledge. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistic, reversed by a recent social research, conducted in our country; show that teachers who had paid identically, had better performance, tried their best to educate students, and made them learned people in the society.
Another reason that is equally important if not more is that how much or how well students learn depends on students themselves. In school, some students get high mark, while some students get lower mark. Broadly speaking, teacher is a person who direct students how to learn. Students should do much more works. The more attention students pay, the more knowledge they learn. The hard-workers probably get higher scores. To put it in other word, students' learning results depend on individual students' intellectual abilities and the time and energy that they put into learning. However, what I alluded to above cannot overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, teachers are learned and experienced person in every society and the knowledge of students depend on how much they learn from teacher. Therefore, teachers spend most amounts of their time teaching and educating students. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
To wrap it up, teachers could not be paid based on how much their students learn. Contemplating the entire aforementioned reasons one soon realize that different teachers have different teaching style, some of them are strict or some gentle. It is clear that students will have learned more from strict teachers. In addition, learning process depends on the students themselves. Teacher is a person who entices students to learn. I highly suggest that teachers should be paid according to their performance. If the authorities do not reverse such a trend, we will soon witness an unsatisfactory and protest between teachers.
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Suggestion: many
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to people'
Suggestion: to people
...educate students, and made them learned people in the society. Another reason that...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isfactory and protest between teachers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.213846153846 0.229887763892 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.181538461538 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.1 0.0866891130778 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0646153846154 0.046263068375 140% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0523076923077 0.0685040099705 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.101538461538 0.118717715034 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0507692307692 0.0351676179071 144% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86276844924 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.02 0.0309702414327 65% => OK
Particles: 0.00153846153846 0.00188951952338 81% => OK
Determiners: 0.0784615384615 0.0887237588012 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0246153846154 0.0209618222197 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0215384615385 0.0139019557991 155% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3696.0 2387.08602151 155% => OK
No of words: 581.0 408.028673835 142% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36144578313 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.48200974243 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.433734939759 0.338922669872 128% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.33734939759 0.251872472559 134% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.247848537005 0.174417080927 142% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141135972461 0.112833075102 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86276844924 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 212.727598566 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481927710843 0.524397521467 92% => OK
Word variations: 58.6209745186 59.2087087015 99% => OK
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6684587814 155% => OK
Sentence length: 18.15625 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2403654482 48.84282405 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15625 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.644075263715 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 51.891189759 45.7405998639 113% => OK
Elegance: 1.22680412371 1.45489161554 84% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356790577156 0.300154397459 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0757287760224 0.103427244359 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0678865553879 0.0752933317313 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.393558986937 0.497263757937 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.117040232416 0.151897553556 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11598442851 0.114077575197 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672240095496 0.0781384742642 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.408604232065 0.336927656856 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0633107607398 0.067059652881 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269090019158 0.210909579961 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464621803067 0.0618886996521 75% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.91756272401 244% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.75985663082 362% => OK
Total topic words: 28.0 13.6433691756 205% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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