Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
We are living in an age which technology plays an important role in everyone's life. People's life is combined with it, and they have different attitudes toward technology. As far as I am concerned there are two different opinions toward the question. Some people believe that technology reduces children's mental effort, while others believe otherwise. I subscribe to the latter one, and there are a couple of reasons to name. Three of which –that is—technology makes children familiar with peculiar things in the world, it motivates them to think, and it makes the life easier for them and they...
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Don't need to put reasons in the introduction part.
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