Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In today’s world, it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, by progressing the technology, one of the most considerable issues is doing the work properly. In other words, people have no willing to lose their jobs and thus they try to do their best in jobs to save them. Among this condition, some people prefer to work quickly and making mistakes, while others have a negative attitude toward it. As far as I am concerned, I agree that doing the work slowly and make sure that everything is correct is better than doing work quickly because of several reasons including getting a better result and having a healthy life.
Achieving substantial result is the first reason of current discussion. In this regard, it should be noted that if we want to be successful in any subject, we need to spend enough time on that subject. By doing work slowly instead of quickly, we spend more time on work and we can concentrate better, as well as, analyzing and finally we achieve a good result in work. For instance, last year I had a hard exam and I started to study for it with my friend. My friend was accustomed in study quickly but quite on the contrary, I used to study slowly with more details. So, I was preparing for the exam about 2 months but my friend took an exam in one week. Finally, my score was better than my friend's score. Hence, one of the interesting reason about doing work slowly is achieving a good result.
Another noteworthy reason is about the health of people. In this case, it sounds logical to say that by increasing the tension or stress in life, the risk of death will be enhanced. On the other hand, if we try to have a uniform life with no stress and risk, we will have a healthier life than before. On of the way to having stress is doing work quickly. In other words, by doing work quickly, we are always concerned about different conditions and making mistake and thus we have attracted a lot of stress in our body that is a danger to our health. Conversely, the person who works slowly is almost happy and relax about the result of works. So, he has no tension in his life and he will be faced with a low risk of death. Therefore, doing work slowly has a profound effect on people health.
In conclusion, doing work slowly not only helps people to gain momentous result in their work but also causes them to have a healthy life. Finally, it is my honor to say Persian expression about this subject that it says " Quick is devil's work".
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46741573034 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39916873202 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480898876404 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9423263044 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3636363636 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2272727273 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95454545455 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26989255946 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852641195507 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711832468372 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179624255044 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462212820061 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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