Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their univesity libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In today's life universities have great effects on student life. Universities provide not only the information need for the stuents to advance their future career but also provide the best education environment for the students to study. In this case, whether the university spend the same amount of money on library as well as sport activities, is a controversial topic in our university. Some people believe that the university is just academic institution and it should focus only on the education process, others strongly oppose the idea. In my views, people should take into their account many factors and consideration before they agree or disagree with the statment.
There is no doubt that sports activities are significantly important for students health and well beign. However, spending the same amount of money on sports activities as library could have some negative consequences on the university and the students. For example, building sports facilities such as soccer field, basktball and tense court can be significantly costly. Moreover, the miantainence of those facilities can consume most of the university budget. Design less money for the library can lower the books qualities offered by the university. Given that most of science refrances are extremely costly, lacking funds will prevent the university from buying such an important refrances. Ultimately, the unersity will losses it reputation among the others if they can not updated their library with the latest text books and refrances.
On the other hand, sports facilities provides a great environment for the students to study more effectively. Students are continuousely under tremendous stress from different area. They could easily get stressed from financial burden or simply from repeated exams. In order to relieve stress, they need to relax or play some sports. Therefore, the university should encourage the students to participate more in sport activities such as water bolling or football to steam out some of their stress. If the studetns just focus on thier study, they may end up dpressed or mentally ill.
As a conclusion, we can safely say that, before we agree or disagree, we should looks for the topic from different prespective. We should indicate which is the weaker subject that the university have. If the university previously neglects sports activities, then it should focus more on building sports facilities and the verses vise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 779, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'update'
Suggestion: update
...tation among the others if they can not updated their library with the latest text book...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'such as', 'as well as', 'in my view', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276595744681 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.120567375887 0.158761421928 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0756501182033 0.0866891130778 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0661938534279 0.046263068375 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0425531914894 0.0685040099705 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127659574468 0.118717715034 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0141843971631 0.0351676179071 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.80077092247 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016548463357 0.0309702414327 53% => OK
Particles: 0.00472813238771 0.00188951952338 250% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.101654846336 0.0887237588012 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0378250591017 0.0209618222197 180% => Try to use less modal verbs (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.00236406619385 0.0139019557991 17% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2442.0 2387.08602151 102% => OK
No of words: 385.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.34285714286 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.405194805195 0.338922669872 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293506493506 0.251872472559 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218181818182 0.174417080927 125% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153246753247 0.112833075102 136% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80077092247 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535064935065 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 59.5995522445 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.25 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1525528454 48.84282405 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.1 120.699889404 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.85 0.644075263715 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 48.6006493506 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.82474226804 1.45489161554 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370961543253 0.300154397459 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115498336048 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0687603094758 0.0752933317313 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482923003371 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127311006171 0.151897553556 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137763494406 0.114077575197 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781524287705 0.0781384742642 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335915721876 0.336927656856 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0891569714238 0.067059652881 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261609435281 0.210909579961 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529476640191 0.0618886996521 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.86379928315 259% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
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Rates: 53 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 16 Out of 30
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